【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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* S0 g6 \' Q' ]& f4 T6 a我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
/ ~2 X$ {* ^) \5 q, ]! wWe meet and talk everyday,
3 T1 V2 H/ x0 M2 S5 GBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 ]9 j* T, v8 M! d2 X# r0 J7 N; kI would probably know how you feel
4 E/ z. {' d9 T, PLove… just the word love
4 K: g( X: @5 s+ p0 b- t( ?" @Why is it so difficult to express?
2 A* Z, \% {# s2 F- f5 qI want to confess that I love you,
# M, Q5 I9 l3 w  j; N" m$ NBut I never did
2 q; j8 L/ I( Z4 COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" y) N$ i6 V+ U7 LIf today isn’t too late,
. x+ X- V; B' p$ |. FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 m3 P+ R, Z1 T5 Z  A- n1 ZEntrust my love within your heart
: V# I1 q: j; }. G- C9 ~Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" l; u; U# _4 @3 FI want to confess that I love you,
' t' F9 c1 ?$ YBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 L7 k9 x; m" U. ~; e; YIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# l; P! e3 }) F1 M& BI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 B* _: L6 w  @# _0 \6 k* hCan I entrust it to you?
) D0 U# o: Z0 N8 hEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  ~/ X- E1 _+ G9 t2 `<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& s. e- ?9 t3 E# f<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- p; j4 y- o3 H<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 }" `3 D1 S1 A5 c<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" M9 |& q- M! s8 p<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  V! {/ |# K3 L7 P7 a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! s' M4 _9 x! F( \6 S$ Z0 a3 @<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
! ^* |( h& x. R/ u# r# B( N<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ _$ l4 b6 @8 i, @<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; H5 N3 @1 ^6 Z/ n<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 L$ h* _- }6 ~" L3 q1 z5 t; ?- Q) b<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ }! G! G3 G" ?<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
; K8 {. ?" V$ \- v/ E<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 r. M3 T# S% }  c' s$ `& E1 h<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 [$ X/ A/ o4 p1 B/ f& q, ?8 C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 K5 k2 B5 `& ~5 Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! H+ c; m+ ?) s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& \: t6 M, k  P  [4 K3 D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 Z  ~% P  A0 b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) I. P8 }+ o1 g: [- G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. x- \+ M  Z4 f! S% q1 P4 o( _4 U: P  a$ J<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ l2 F* |3 I5 y: Z- m# Z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
. y1 T* w! _* v; m2 i" U0 `<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) N! k! _5 l) U+ m9 ?<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' F  |. S7 N* C! I% X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# B+ X! z2 K  ~- v1 G4 V<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* i& b5 A9 P: ]! ~6 X7 x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ K2 {' t1 b5 x: S. _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- D7 Z7 A3 r! [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, f8 Q4 P! A4 a' r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" Y9 q6 N! j3 X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
* M3 e  R* s4 N/ B4 s7 ~; H<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 }" E1 o, K2 t/ o( G<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 x, B: {6 @' C<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>