【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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% F+ I; E( H! A- M  n
: d( A3 ?: q( }1 p我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- r1 @+ @$ S. JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 R+ H# T+ v$ S( P! _3 sFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
1 n2 A: o. y) z) g7 |+ B* E4 GWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, k5 e4 m4 v* P* @5 `0 y1 dIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; ^" o& x5 p, g) `I would probably know how you feel
# M! |5 S7 r7 i" f1 h* qLove… just the word love
1 m$ M/ m# F* T# E; V5 OWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ D" @& l* {, f$ _/ p, GI want to confess that I love you,
6 v2 V9 @0 x1 ^9 m( U0 tBut I never did
- j8 S) v4 F3 `2 }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% l4 h3 B% D  b* xEntrust my love within your heart
, Q' C4 M, B, d/ G2 K: SLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
8 n+ i  ^# g. ~$ xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 v% c6 k6 t" _. XIf today isn’t too late,
4 g* ^; L" _# x" k0 m0 GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 U( b  y1 {6 U# W6 ]; E$ TCan I entrust it to you?
8 `9 ~: A- N/ Q% ?Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
, Z2 f7 t" I8 o0 e4 ^: dEntrust my love within your heart

% x& \. \* @1 N" G[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# v* _* M* Y  S7 C& S4 u<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ l: t& n8 m# M- S- b% h9 ?, J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  |! r8 }4 K4 ]2 H<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' R" B! n# f6 I/ }8 _9 D<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 u% ^3 |0 {- @! g& c<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 F( Z# W. l2 U, F  `8 T<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* `, Q8 q) ^. U5 _' w- N<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! e! [- a- v2 P# X<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. ?2 g* h0 P( K, h' c9 K9 E<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ R$ B( \  y7 S# I; ?) z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ h+ X7 Y' [( x8 @0 F0 z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
0 F+ C7 z3 ]. I5 b7 ^& F( D6 I<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  k. C5 g7 n5 b<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( B9 d2 V; I* B' l& K3 y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
% \/ p' [3 P) F% H0 r5 Z+ G/ d! S<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 H) S' L9 l" n. S) O/ A6 h& F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* v0 p( I" ~1 X: _/ V  M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 K1 Q* F, p% K' o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) Z2 ]' |5 S+ }5 @# M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ L, Q1 k" L0 F! E6 [8 R. ?: Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 B6 K  j2 W7 ~6 K2 C5 @+ j<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" Y% ^0 d# |, Q/ q<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
7 R& [5 s2 ]3 U* E  B<P>但我不会 </P>
) E" E* @' t* W1 q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 t4 a* `, u# r8 i: q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' z7 E  ~% u' |6 N& H9 I* q# q/ D<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# g9 x2 k! J7 V$ b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 t% t6 y# ^) |. N# B( G: F- p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 ^6 O9 t+ ]0 Y# v0 A$ D<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- r; W5 z! |' e* O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' J# n( J' q/ N7 B( A; `" X<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: m' k, `: Q3 z+ d' X" N 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

. U# s6 J. S4 D! y6 k6 {; Z/ \: P% v这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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2 o0 J; D% f6 V2 ]' U) B- W<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>