【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& G3 r7 g7 k1 I( B+ y! r+ vFrom the first moment we met,
% J8 `! H; }( o$ `  a7 {5 TI already loved you with all my heart
2 @  V2 g. T; D  l" n; G+ n4 SWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ y4 J4 {$ U6 oIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" V1 \7 ?! S: T7 a+ i8 b/ DI would probably know how you feel
  k& i: E! Q- C+ }Love… just the word love
6 h5 m( m- G/ u# e4 ?Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 |6 o1 e, I/ ^& uBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, K9 d7 t* @  i7 c6 EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ j0 w6 O6 S% x4 c8 d9 p, b: y6 rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 P" [/ t" z$ v4 d" O  u" `, \Entrust my love within your heart
0 R1 l1 k, V; x; ]" ~3 Z# FLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( |0 a, ~9 t& l( G" xI want to confess that I love you,
+ w. a8 Q3 U8 @5 q1 M1 n8 nBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% H, P: V& z$ T# DIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, g4 c$ k9 _/ n$ I" |Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
+ x/ o2 o1 A, B* F" }0 n$ N1 C1 oEntrust my love within your heart

! a) l& K, g3 m  Y/ S[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- D3 b  _  h, N  r) z) E4 a8 V9 G<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ u; d% A/ l0 P8 a& l! R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ _$ \0 D& R7 n6 U2 r) @- r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 C! c2 c' u: h$ g' {; y( E+ u<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% J+ `0 V/ K0 |<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 s6 ?' C4 M6 y$ Y) B! U  @4 j<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 t0 r: Z$ ~: `, W% i" h8 R<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 g% K5 e2 @) X& e' t<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 F, `  F( x- s$ q; W, B1 }# d<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: V7 j" q; Q" ^: S/ ^<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% q# p' f! j) h. H<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, [7 T$ |# Q( a) C# Z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ I- w6 b+ E5 w  N0 B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
% q6 u' Y9 D* |0 _  W. ]! {" U<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 Y% M& n" C+ q; ~/ a' l* l' [/ X4 M. M" ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 [& {$ V& T5 Z" _. j* e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
' `" u: x. t, ^9 x8 `<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- n" j1 g& C0 W6 m) z1 F* X<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 w! `; J6 |+ e. a<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 d' ^) b' p- U- P, I<P>But I never did </P>
( b# L# w' b0 `: W<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' f9 X% ]! D* k" O1 L<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 V$ B* c/ q+ [4 _6 b9 X2 l: h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; ^% M0 Y& V& Z* V4 ^<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  `8 @; @8 |0 t' j+ r& E; s<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 i1 K1 g. p/ \1 Q% G7 W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* n6 V0 {: t) g. Z6 u5 \. n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; }: X$ B6 K' r( B- t% j' j/ b$ S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; F' _4 D9 `) K9 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: f3 a# `1 Y, P! H: z+ @7 `<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 ?, \3 S) B; z2 g' D, A! I<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>