【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( ]5 y% j3 y; TFrom the first moment we met,
/ P* t! T( D1 v8 i0 zI already loved you with all my heart
' S$ A7 n: g; P0 g$ S2 {( c9 x( cWe meet and talk everyday,
# C  t. S( H# B! L7 I/ UBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ Z, Z1 G$ U) mIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 @5 [' ^2 o1 s% S. i# F( sIf today isn’t too late,
7 o! _( O' T4 dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 E& I! W2 X8 O4 DEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
2 s$ Y" S$ K& Y1 {) V  ^Why is it so difficult to express?
. L' Y' `7 J) G3 qI want to confess that I love you,
3 G" J( [1 m1 G5 r+ WBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ R- y, @, o) Y; h  q3 S; ^If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% o* T3 F) ?) q% g  I  WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ F# P, X5 ]  G) xCan I entrust it to you?
# W# P% C* i( s6 p2 j9 D5 kEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
. T6 e2 U' B7 ^1 u6 @Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- o8 h5 ~+ ]/ u& ], W  r<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* T0 y# R3 v2 a: X5 x0 @<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- f+ ]: P8 S$ b1 `% u<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ [2 X* n' ~: B& {<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' z. }; n# O0 j  e3 g9 |8 C5 F<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: L- \0 X8 [; l, z! `( M<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 C& n/ h2 B, C0 M1 j' {& L3 Y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  A: t, x# A  ~" a: Q' \' k<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 ^* M+ W& o6 m; c5 L' G# S<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 r1 Z0 K/ a/ b. w; U, U4 A<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ E) t! a) x7 k. r. y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ ~$ f8 E. u' m- r' n, K0 W7 A" _<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# _* x) U5 |7 R) s+ a! H<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" G3 g9 f* f! b$ x/ J2 p<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 R3 o- {1 G- N; J" M<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: j  \) y- Q/ U; ?<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' P* \1 h4 {0 e) ?+ Z, H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. w0 k0 S+ U5 q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- `: O0 D# `4 w- j% Y$ L7 \3 r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 @8 K6 {; D! _% J3 J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  y* I0 L* \& q8 F9 k8 [0 N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# {# y) ?- {' X& t<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! @! k$ ]5 ]0 N/ ^5 c4 `5 X1 J9 K, K<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- U# v, z2 x/ a8 C1 _4 D<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" ~0 ~7 o  b/ e- t, g. N, Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
# o0 L$ y. |4 m' H<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; o/ H9 M! N! ~4 A( T  \# |<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* k3 o6 g2 y& l& @* N  n) v1 Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 ^. S4 E3 v5 W2 A<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* S: h' C0 b# C3 k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: ?( R/ V$ a- p0 N4 ?' j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 ~* U/ T$ \* z5 P- M: |8 O 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

* f9 ?, \0 `1 _) W" U. D9 ~; m' B这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 Q% A( c) ]% t% \9 e0 Z: ?- Z0 J这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 H  P, o4 a, p- [# z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>