【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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: t# [- ~) k1 ~' ]+ M我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 \; C/ C) @! w4 e) AThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
  M' ~3 S# x4 |* ~5 ?- ~I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% h5 f( K# Z5 c# e" nIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
% x& e$ v+ c. }; D& u4 \0 a  s1 YWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 o2 i7 B+ \' ^# yIf today isn’t too late,
3 n  C. O% _: @% W9 kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; t5 c2 z0 t, L6 M, W. r" N/ n0 oCan I entrust it to you?
5 j" Z6 j: [8 ?8 [; i# b" vEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
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2 D2 H! g" ]: K  Z0 m+ j  Z+ POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: v0 E" J6 b; U6 p5 i1 I! lIf today isn’t too late,
6 }1 X' q- i' ^4 c7 g7 ~4 iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ F: Y, W( ^) y0 e3 |: C& T- C1 cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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9 H& @" x3 A, x+ f5 d9 T- W6 c2 I[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 V9 D1 a! d( [& Y. U<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 C# ?) E0 M& Y* |' H( G<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; Z2 e9 D( @5 V- u( i<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 Z/ M. h* O4 a+ |# E<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: d$ N% w' g0 g. X% j+ l- X' M: m<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) C4 t: T( }0 J: v3 V7 W<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 p: T8 L6 g. b0 J$ n& u8 W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* I/ {0 b. a$ J4 ]% R0 g0 s<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 R3 p7 P% I- L<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 v/ y9 g2 V# ?& Y! _" j! a4 N<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ u1 `! r/ B0 c+ q0 v# b5 x2 K/ V0 ~<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' @7 j+ b" ]4 A; X; Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 M% x, Q8 W& C' C2 |4 \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. ?8 P1 Z2 P% c0 B<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 R6 x$ {1 x% v9 c+ a9 G/ Q. c<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 L. X5 T2 V+ b  ~, p' V, F<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! J" t: l$ [0 `' B<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
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<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 Q& m" B( f' f# B" {  i<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& |9 A' [  h( G; f! `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: w* t3 Q5 j$ z# T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( x1 {$ m( s' L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# F- R5 h) N8 c2 H; B* h& z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' p' k' C1 S3 Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 R4 G" g) t% r3 y; f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, r8 f& O1 [8 w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: p& T4 n5 J/ n* j: [/ D; o& Z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

5 ~# e7 x" m6 u这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 {9 D+ a  A/ H; f<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>