【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
+ S5 ?$ [2 z" o' F0 H3 |. NThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 @# i( E$ n6 `3 e2 k8 xFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
/ X4 W6 x+ i1 jWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( K' f8 s5 i6 z# |I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
9 Y0 K8 ]6 X7 dWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 J( e* H! T) E8 n' |One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. ~6 `0 j& A9 w& S2 ]" z$ L+ _" fLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 I; R8 ?% v0 S1 a4 SI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 ]: f0 Z7 A4 x1 k, A4 h5 FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 b# ]/ L( ]9 C" jIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 B. z$ i; ?! zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 K4 s2 |1 P8 Q! j6 HCan I entrust it to you?
( V; V# c  _+ s4 G6 n/ O$ ]$ QEntrust my love within your heart
, H% m$ j5 o, i3 h' Q2 I) Z9 u  zCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 P/ F) j! ^2 e3 {0 ]" T: w<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- B5 z  u, u0 q4 G1 l* _( i' r' V+ M" F<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ r; u6 x6 G3 P' `( I( c2 }* u- Y: H<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 n( s+ A% T" v) l3 \3 e1 f<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, h0 ~( w+ N) \( H+ |, l<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# z3 K# D) q) J<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ b4 f5 p3 Q. b; J5 M( Q: p( a: C0 b<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, Q* [; a8 \, p6 s; H<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 Q& ^: V, I& Y8 ^% f<P>但我不会</P>
" Y) \1 _, B3 W- [$ q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# e! E  i" n5 z' I<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
% \! N6 _2 |6 C% Q8 R% {<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# ], v! k6 V$ F5 |7 `* }& J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% o+ g# U( B; H* L* H2 b9 @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% S) j' }! F5 \0 U5 P9 ]- O9 S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 c- n( F$ w8 D/ o' H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! P2 I' l$ E6 t$ ]' V) Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) H0 D% O% p" y1 n& G( Z3 _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* a! p1 W7 K4 K/ k* E<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) q1 B# S+ A/ J<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
9 ?; R) W1 N2 W, j6 E$ a<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& m# F3 q: c6 [2 w' q& ^7 B# M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. `" v. ^/ G( }9 V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  w3 |6 s& p+ W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 M- G: v! |, n7 G# V, t2 Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' @2 g7 [0 Z( _5 n1 G) |6 v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, p' \1 Z, Y. a8 b! r) a: G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# P9 N. e+ B2 O& j3 M  W<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" N& {( s! _0 Z$ g6 s6 R<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* |- n, n6 f( x# U) w. h/ }7 T9 P<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>