【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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$ ]8 h- d" _: v% a" t5 Q我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 T& X! b4 U* E/ t6 }' n. k+ cThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: e3 ?# A# H: g' U* |! W) JFrom the first moment we met,
  P0 P( \- G6 `7 KI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
% F4 d3 L. _( m8 n( h0 [9 X/ RBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' }" P2 g- _" V% r1 P5 ^If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ K( v3 l+ G  t' k. dLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 z1 R: Z( `; c- X2 q$ wBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 ^) _! K, Q, W9 l- ECan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- B3 S" N: d4 h/ l- P$ YBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; I0 c6 {- c/ Y! S; \# m- xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 h* e* u, x, H% @9 g! nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 Q* u' j2 q1 K, @: p& U% WCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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! h8 e9 V! Z: j7 J  ]/ E[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 x1 O1 C, X) y/ X& b3 P9 s<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 z$ Y6 d! R2 f$ l) D<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( X4 w7 ^" S5 P0 E* x<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 I1 C1 _. I2 E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ m- q) G" p- f<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! O+ E: L9 i5 S+ X* f# J# a# q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ r. E" i  n* A! Q+ d+ k<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( M" _3 w* O( N<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ ?2 d; T3 T9 G. J% c2 r6 [" l<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 ?6 F! J. a' [<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 _7 j; \( ~8 E+ J3 X) ]8 G<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 S' u7 A& a0 V. @& R4 a$ U  |<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( w& E& S. H9 O* s: |<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( o5 U& @0 I3 F3 m0 k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( u! e# N' c4 a( `! q5 T' H# b4 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- V; b; u* O/ _- o7 k* J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ h/ {/ J9 S# i8 l5 X3 @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  R( d$ d6 I+ K; q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 R& ]0 d. ~" _# Y7 V<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 m+ H7 Y& y' r0 J<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
' Y% s( r  O. w4 z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 i4 c) w# Z/ x1 [. t) Y<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# ~% x: b$ Q+ N, u! V<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 L1 H' x0 n% u- Z5 }4 z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( q$ ?$ [9 \. t5 W$ _5 R3 r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- v, H2 D) x8 J2 n4 G; r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 Q6 N2 k; I  H; J* X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- t6 w- B! q3 V- q# S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. g: i  K4 d# e" p  n8 w2 B+ z- T 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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0 a2 s( z5 Z& F8 ?8 X这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 s2 D- c( E% z4 [2 J# U, W<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>