【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# G: _1 c  G6 K- R; eFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
9 ^, L/ O9 g8 O( x1 V* QWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 y' H$ G7 p/ F: y3 G! E7 ?2 U& kIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% h8 S. b# `! A& j% CBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. e  ~# q. U+ [1 y& P: F) }  lCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
; N% s8 M7 `, ~5 ?. v) k* y! fWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 @* a$ }! J& X( t$ A& ~But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
3 d6 F# e: U1 H9 t% I) V" `7 nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 E: H$ w8 W7 q, WCan I entrust it to you?
5 _% Y4 K. V/ k3 t: e1 d3 QEntrust my love within your heart
; P' k6 a# S8 hCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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8 ?% s: e. B! G$ [[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% a6 \2 m9 l: q$ I' `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ W/ X4 U+ f" p2 H, @1 H<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 Y0 R; L" e; |& L9 v& I/ u5 D<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ |% i  p5 W; ^3 t$ P1 z( R<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" O) C2 i' S2 j<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ F6 ~( X! @# l# N; V<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: r6 i0 i5 p5 w<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) [9 ^# x( U( ]<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" u3 d+ E" g5 S- V, t7 L2 t<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  j6 I* i+ d2 z* t, g) i! g<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, y7 B2 }3 h0 N( p  q/ [) U6 B<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. O! p4 z! @6 f9 J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 v2 A, ^. O: z9 o, l4 x6 q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' ~; o. N) T) Q/ H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 r, X2 }3 z7 ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: b. l& e# Y: e5 h' Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: L: G2 B# I9 Q( |* b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: i$ I/ v; W$ T  x3 J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ Q' t1 y) ?; D. @9 s2 O+ @<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, x4 A) H  j  y" u) |3 ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 H3 i6 u: s. W6 u<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  ~; X3 Q( g& O. p/ |7 F1 A<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! ?( T" w' g2 G5 V1 z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 q) N+ x/ I  L4 b. J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 ]3 v$ ^) m3 y  N6 u<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 d# s# w4 i9 C3 J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( o7 y; p6 y# ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" l1 q( v% ^/ ]( z$ B6 V3 H4 h1 E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& f9 t9 d$ x* J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ [# ]7 q. H: ]% q  N' q. T<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% E& ]9 C6 r$ w& [2 e+ B 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

" A; ^2 B/ l& b# _2 v这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>