【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
: ^, G, ^, j3 |! V  rThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: c& D7 ~% A+ p+ Q3 qThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
! O; }4 o  O. n$ l7 lWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 m$ i% L# ^& W3 O1 rIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 _2 Z, k: E2 H  D1 f. F9 l8 W- e* O- jI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
3 B, S. U5 `! E5 X4 ~9 |Why is it so difficult to express?
6 i9 b8 U2 {* ~6 bI want to confess that I love you,
2 e6 [" s9 ?; @2 lBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 |; A* @$ \. x- j" L: r3 hIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' V  [5 o& k% j/ LCan I entrust it to you?
9 z2 v+ h) C* @. ZEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
% f5 z( ^  w  ]6 TWhy is it so difficult to express?
" T4 u3 l$ v8 c' N/ E* {+ E+ RI want to confess that I love you,
6 X4 Z+ j1 x; C! v  K/ v- TBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) g! a  D5 q7 cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

4 c9 X: P8 y( P9 R! W$ g. D[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

* u3 y5 Y5 D# l' R<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( [2 Q' S$ U% W# Y% W<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 B: {% d! X9 R+ ~/ S6 _( O) B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& E) ]( R/ \4 e( V<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 }. H7 n% x/ U" E+ a<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 E8 {, \: K) O+ {1 m+ S<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- V- l1 B. C; p! h8 w0 K3 s<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& O  N3 A: A) V5 V: L7 l<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 G" h  t- K9 M7 z: Q' L2 U& s0 a<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  k4 U5 R; S4 E# f  D9 A<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  W# |0 ?2 ]2 o/ j4 c<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ T3 ?  J  j5 \- r# ~6 }7 T+ x<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 k! D# v9 t  p* i<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# m" n6 U3 b" Q7 Z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 A) s1 W4 s  s8 b* v. w<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 Z8 Z4 U' k# }: h0 e4 C<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 z/ a% W5 T  w$ \/ c1 x/ x+ @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* @% h& ~' D" O5 I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 B/ P" E$ n: C  N+ ~. i0 E+ J. j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% y5 |7 a2 M. C: G! ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% x" S+ A+ ?9 K# L& D' _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 z' R9 P1 H# A3 @2 r; q1 r+ N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 Q$ n* A- `4 ~5 n' W4 x4 z<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 u( m' Q$ C  f: ]+ T6 |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" i2 G- L1 i  [( i! k# b3 V<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 i) r0 K# f" s$ X" H) P<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ l9 C, G8 [& o  \' Y0 M+ d<P>But I never did </P>
. ^* k0 S8 P. H! t( A  w; f0 a7 g3 [<P>但我不会 </P>
/ Y9 h% \1 _0 E% ^8 q9 z* ^( ?- j<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 D, z& H4 r9 R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 L. w! c5 y6 x; L& z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' |1 ~( F& p+ F, [: _+ y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ m: ^( O' J' }9 i7 @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 O! I; s5 C: n5 M3 l' ?' Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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/ X4 D" A( [% d2 \( {( B+ W& K这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& u: n. j! w! k  k. ]5 o+ n<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ @4 q0 q& X- T" n! z" f7 X<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>