【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ j/ w+ J' O) q" b8 ~That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
2 }& U/ ^& f/ J: {+ A* [1 h3 S$ y8 y: [We meet and talk everyday,
! b$ N1 O/ z2 m6 ]- i) {6 v( PBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
- A4 ~; R7 w: z! BWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- z9 r7 G8 m+ E. o/ _But I never did
3 t8 G9 N  N! g+ p4 FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% O4 y* i5 v# z* r1 ], |7 T2 TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ f( n9 x) }0 q4 dEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; }2 ~) M; L8 gI want to confess that I love you,
/ k# F5 n& N: P% P/ DBut I never did
/ o* n6 a' I! eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: @# g7 T/ O4 I" b) AIf today isn’t too late,
' q6 ?; M4 S/ |5 Y( k/ E" YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ p$ D2 Y- ~. f- s9 hEntrust my love within your heart
' e8 n' `& ?8 T# ^Can I entrust it to you?
* R3 M* W8 L6 r6 V9 ^) YEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  B$ w4 m1 Q9 t<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 E3 J% E! }  F& T/ d" M# b<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 B8 Q: s' t' v) b( e<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( w2 |' @( [* }& x: U<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 ]! f4 U7 Q% ~, G. J<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; B# e4 Z# T- Q4 @* s, Q/ ^3 D# [<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 h/ ?& ^7 T4 y& N<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 q9 X- H7 w* h4 H<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  \- s0 k2 g. P6 a7 T- l5 v% p<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; C, R- s5 R% [% \  F+ g<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 T7 D6 l* m  p4 \7 m<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( g# S  @/ Y: |5 S7 _+ e" \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& K7 Q% V3 {* u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 x7 K8 B) X( r! o/ i0 ]# ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
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0 j% M( o  ]; H<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 N5 e- q7 h( v* Q<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% @$ V$ w$ }$ _8 |. P<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( Z5 J+ z# C: o# P<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
2 w2 s/ e! B, ~) l) [7 w<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# d0 G! K6 z9 C3 _; i" s0 ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ N. N- m5 N; \<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 `$ ]! A% b, O5 K3 `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: k& [; C) D% I3 O/ B( j$ F8 q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 m' y1 K" a" h. E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; V  B# P$ Z6 ?; b# C7 I1 |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>