【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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; `" @7 i- ^$ T% a我另将歌词附在此。
' ?+ `) o2 T+ P$ c" I8 i4 n' c; xThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 u6 U9 `" `0 o7 S7 F. c, f8 XFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" t  o1 k5 {$ |/ z$ s1 KIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 S: q1 Z. `9 D. b. tI would probably know how you feel
/ P( ]  C: Q5 K/ QLove… just the word love
  k4 W2 ~; M# @, @7 ?% b) I( aWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 O* R; d2 {4 x8 n+ |1 hI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 }2 o; a' _0 E" w5 oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 Y  G1 y) E' q# X' z: eIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ i: p3 S! Y, c, K" y( s' QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ b8 n8 o% c' Q" \5 v0 a0 ]6 \( @Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* d7 F# z5 V9 C( [9 X0 AI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 }: S/ n0 n7 Z9 \, MIf today isn’t too late,
& |1 ?6 E! m! JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" N/ U# r' |  }- {5 ^6 {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# d/ y6 r- A2 Q! Y& B: U, D- GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- w1 [  |$ ~9 A6 a, H/ m- QCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 G' Z8 p# O& W$ m9 g% O<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ d6 B5 }" U! L, d; r7 M* K<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ z% N+ G! M2 U6 R6 O: m<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 h' B2 Y" p$ q6 W<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 M6 M8 Q! a/ W/ E8 G" P<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 }5 w! V9 l; Y5 j4 P<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) a$ H! K1 n& O  D9 F<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 W. }3 ?6 ^7 G* }' e( [<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 q& \1 B" i% ~5 l( W: h<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% Q4 K7 K3 a8 }7 d1 k% ~! K9 I7 F<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: R/ z. y6 b. o<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 g2 ?% x" L2 T5 |; W3 S<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- q1 N4 ?- S1 W<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 x+ z4 @& H9 `& ?<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* k7 N: y4 h" i<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ z' o$ R9 X. K  g<P>但我不会</P>
/ l* M/ v4 z+ W- x<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 F' F; e- D+ R( G2 G$ m<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( \! S% _* V; E) V<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 I  G. n9 [) l2 f+ L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, a: g0 ~) i- O+ c8 v+ H6 n% i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 u2 Q4 }) L0 E4 D' {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 w7 h3 v1 m4 C/ K1 K1 d$ {+ W<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
' U2 \' B2 `9 ?- v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 I. t. ^& T. ?<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 B5 S4 B1 M. Z! ~0 |8 c<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 t' u$ K9 c3 h  t, }5 t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& \. Y4 _# B* }4 X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 N- o0 v" U% u3 S3 Q9 R. l2 B% W- p7 U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 u4 F; k; n) x  n+ Z# r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% t! W; F! z3 ~5 T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 d" b" M, f7 E3 @" d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' ^& ]( f6 B( ?+ L2 I0 I<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 j# @* f4 F( x  r6 J) v这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>