【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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6 x6 |! D, O: D3 K! X8 V$ |我另将歌词附在此。
8 ?* m! C0 w: u6 h3 ?8 iThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# ?# m! e2 ]% G/ K; L( Q8 f' ?5 uFrom the first moment we met,
+ O* s' C  b( g6 C& SI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
3 M, o0 }9 Z2 }' L, dBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' u9 n9 J, f# R( GI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# T+ Z/ f/ h, T( iBut I never did
- }/ V, {2 F; OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 K1 y" \, J  y: ]; ?$ |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ I. J' L9 O2 s6 nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 V. r# |. V- {9 M9 [6 ^But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- n$ n% ~' @' K" SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 W! _# _. O, nEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- U: W( X# E8 ]5 [1 \Entrust my love within your heart

" M1 B# r, m, Q8 P# ]& R[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

- N* h6 g" Q% I8 W<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 H2 C6 c; A; E<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 P5 O, q1 ~# V8 N" w, Y7 Q+ [<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ Y. ^* m, E2 q( r1 v1 P8 P2 n1 T<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, [8 t/ s1 Y5 O6 O7 a/ ~  p! t<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. R' x. ~  g8 ]% ~& d<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% c0 ?( `: s: B$ x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 z. t& E$ A' t9 x<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ \4 `+ I9 _* i6 a& ?) \! U7 R<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 c! l2 {, H$ Y1 A4 }& I. L8 y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 X" S7 i: x7 ^8 b0 }$ m  R1 ^<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
9 Z) o: T) ^' r' O: s( m<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ }. r. n. X9 T3 o2 h% N<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 ]9 C4 q! P, p% X& ^6 ]7 s( p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 Y) m# Y3 D$ Z7 Z" ~1 ^, Y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 F/ A" r7 [5 M5 s: L) }0 z0 d: K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" ]% g: Z3 o* K  |( u# [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; P. ?, u. ^. \7 Y7 O4 A' P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 T# M- Y0 u0 ^# R' r/ ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 \5 O1 t" H! F& a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 F6 P+ b, }& R<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 t/ H" P3 ~: ^& Q+ J+ z<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 \5 W/ P3 t! \8 C3 `( j5 d<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 x9 O2 ^7 ~. Y$ \<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; c& k2 g, _/ S' V+ |<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( n3 D9 r$ C. \3 O4 W4 h- a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 T2 S! i' I. J  a# l<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 E/ o7 Y( C+ L6 v, |, U$ K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 g7 U/ n$ V9 m: m$ W* V3 S5 J; @<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 X3 {7 u/ ~+ g, t1 Y. ]<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 A7 |1 D0 l, p' A这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 r/ s+ X" |1 B$ M7 q9 p, c1 v<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 G, Q! Q7 _7 g& T+ j<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>