【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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! @8 {1 p) x% u) j% S* X我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ ~7 I& }( F! P  t4 H& wFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ [. V0 g" q; g: }$ b9 V6 iIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
0 a" u  ?' y5 H8 u5 G( aLove… just the word love
& `  R3 f9 u  @% DWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% k! N: Z6 b+ R$ ^* {/ }3 K; KBut I never did
" |8 E/ t, w% D) k. ]4 T$ ~* ^3 p3 h8 {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# m" U% O9 o. Y# M% e8 eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
0 i. F" l! I7 g0 t- n+ z/ aWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. L) C+ O0 O+ u; T1 s0 IBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ s; F5 |9 V5 u8 [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 \. F6 ?$ Z9 X  I# s$ m0 ICan I entrust it to you?
' }+ B/ i. y$ R1 W* A( kEntrust my love within your heart
0 T! N* @. R1 ?1 u5 n) x8 ICan I entrust it to you?
- P% }8 o7 ~/ c) W* bEntrust my love within your heart
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8 e- J6 ~/ I! f[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

5 [" N. z  \* I, l: |# L/ |<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ n. x, n' Q. d3 E4 y3 h: F<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; Q1 u! p# M& I  F3 e3 Q6 b; u<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 V8 n; Y: z. |3 f<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 f$ l1 n1 E& b" ]- U# H( U<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
! O3 \% [1 t3 m9 l<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 f% f" U3 o! K+ d<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ A8 C0 \! @) p- \+ y$ y4 F, ?<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* E# i3 N2 J- Q/ a% r<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 c" Z7 t% g# Y) h; _) Q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& `0 g6 k) s( {5 s" h<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 ?7 Z) S( \8 y! H( H( c4 h- ~<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
  }  N' h2 r. @! F<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  H/ q8 n& x9 o" B9 F& W+ F<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 A" Z2 t+ M/ I. v8 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  z) r1 {$ ?* p! U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 m& _! y( y) n5 y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 ^3 W: ?9 t1 K" }  F<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ V* m* T# e0 B! J/ j2 K<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: `3 p1 K' S1 c# h/ H% a<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 }) j# b; u# H# J$ u' B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ f. D& ~; d8 p+ @9 D4 \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- r" Z! y6 S4 [" `6 I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ G: K  I0 V: y0 r8 ?4 Q( v$ Y/ ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 F% _8 O! @' I$ Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

& u* u3 f0 K& x; ~$ F: B  {% i这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- q" ]' M( C) _, v; T$ ?& X7 S<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>