【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
- N+ z4 @9 {% ^5 v# N( nThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 L- ~, N( k- p6 Q$ m5 w2 BThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' ?! a( [# _6 u/ b) hFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 K" n' L  ]( Z9 C! }. MWe meet and talk everyday,
( Y, k! X2 Z4 g- P9 A0 oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 y. d; g, v8 }3 a- {If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, ]8 \! ?, }  r" W$ @$ \. xI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) o: R  z( |) ?2 w2 jWhy is it so difficult to express?
- w8 \4 H& v, l  f7 _I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 G. f& |4 b8 r; W9 j! Q( \If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- z- g# C9 |) z" c8 K% t7 U$ g: FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) w) T- g0 _0 xCan I entrust it to you?
2 Q" G- D/ q/ J) w" @4 e5 `- k- uEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
, `, p; l+ l: I8 [, AWhy is it so difficult to express?
- M4 E- R. v  K$ ~" ^6 Z9 U6 J- XI want to confess that I love you,
& w: z8 _& w' b5 G7 @4 IBut I never did
. ^- {, c$ @- c3 J' lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) u7 u- W& c% A8 S2 ]If today isn’t too late,
9 R( W" A  {6 V5 M( tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& J4 [) O# j& q" c: @+ DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! |( G# i: n/ ], \* }Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

& J, m2 e& L6 j2 |  r[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

/ G% O1 i+ X5 V1 C<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- f+ s  j: Z, D5 G& a<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 M3 k1 J8 j0 F& m+ O& _) ?8 J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' y8 b9 E. P" h9 F6 @  S<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 B) ?, i7 a! l<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 U: N" F1 e* i$ e# g1 d) {<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ ~" N  s4 M9 T! H( T! l/ c& g  G<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 s: T6 k/ B; J' ~' }( M( s  M<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ `+ u: f; {# |4 p- m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: ~% k( X6 v5 c5 G) Q2 M3 h( o<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 _) V. a4 G) D<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# u# R+ e3 p5 W* r3 Y3 y+ U) v5 Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 `; V+ ~3 M6 h6 }9 H<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& K' Q$ F2 \+ }& D; I7 d<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 `- h* L! c$ x0 U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% |1 p9 h' }' v7 @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 K* T' l$ @. P! f4 M' |4 B3 Z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ `- D8 U6 [7 A, h* |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 }# @: b8 p& l8 V2 D! z/ b<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 B( Y* V+ ?" A1 k0 ^$ M<P>But I never did </P>
, M8 }7 X- ?9 M: S) X8 |<P>但我不会 </P>
4 M' b+ _) S4 D4 Q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; d6 [+ E- W- E, m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* h4 |2 T2 ]- M( M2 n/ o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* P. y, K* x, E4 T$ z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 y$ [9 s1 `6 d' k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# z3 k) s1 p. `. V% w# S5 w<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* z4 J- ]. z% v( D<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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, `8 S7 ]* }* b! J3 m  z8 T这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 ?  d1 K& O% v$ z+ t<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>