【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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: m, N8 L0 d8 \- e0 I我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- b, B2 V; @3 _; j) y$ @2 _6 e; R. KThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; Z5 m( v# P% i/ yFrom the first moment we met,
; k' o* B# e- ^2 L3 m  Z6 oI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
1 c* R, ~  _' A# ^% U6 NBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
0 G& S2 X% _& Q! `$ F% f& GLove… just the word love
" ]! {3 f: g9 ]Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ T, c) h: e' L) |If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( k3 Y( T5 P, T7 V, {1 k( D2 b5 gCan I entrust it to you?
7 t$ j1 {: ~) M% w- T: |Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
* y9 A, T2 r. r8 ^+ FWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 B5 p7 w' T2 q; Y! `2 s, p. j! ~I want to confess that I love you,
$ P  k/ r# P7 GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* l% j' A5 Y, c& l% u& V8 e' h# ~If today isn’t too late,
3 }2 P2 B& d. r  b- H3 W+ iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& [; W8 x! J: tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 z- ~% c2 R. u. L1 W5 SEntrust my love within your heart
' }& N' Y7 W+ RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

* V- \9 Z" }) I" z/ T: T[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* @7 i7 m1 T8 Y( i, c<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* l! B  e% [7 D. T8 N+ J4 @<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% }) L& P7 `; H9 X' r' i<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, b$ Y: u! v) m5 d, [<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 M. f6 y! O' h7 ~$ v( D& h<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. f6 [; X: W' I5 j6 n0 h8 Q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( {8 f) F0 |' J' H0 {# N9 `<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; i- A. [. J3 b# A<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 K6 c) ^' d$ I1 Y/ U<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" B7 x! q7 A" H8 e. `) T, C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# D; I. r6 ^0 Z- V! P<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  C2 R% f7 l  G  r/ j<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; e( }% s, B% d8 _3 s4 Z- V7 W<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 q. N( R. l; d: }2 l/ x( z5 ?<P>但我不会</P>
( Q: T+ w# C" T8 R3 \& N0 D<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. L9 L$ E3 x+ M; B6 a6 a5 C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ u# l4 p) B* c3 b; _) ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ v( Y( S) ?2 k! w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' a& z. W' k6 n9 r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 g9 L( T8 r  {, _. c" ]3 ]3 C* h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 r1 o: |- P) S, T+ i<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" ?1 h& H9 g& x5 d4 w& K8 m2 R% S<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 f/ p( P$ C6 ~) _<P>But I never did </P>
. h1 w1 v* V( V) ]. W<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 }. \4 r$ O" W3 @0 K( F6 l<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: j# d; ?) x' p* C. ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! [9 G) h2 d" `- d9 w+ ~& ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; ^6 K6 O8 x: r; d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( X: O# I) O) t0 c) H8 P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: @/ ], F2 k+ [; P1 g! |/ Z& N' c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
& }1 z& j2 A4 @/ Y7 d<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 h, U& W/ _/ M 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 A; y" p9 L% T, \4 W) L5 a  c/ T<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" g% F% K* A- [: t- U4 h7 f5 Y, S& g  ^<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>