【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
4 `" K. F* ]! D, ^- \: WThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ z, i6 A3 r0 y$ m3 {9 A8 H8 zFrom the first moment we met,
3 [4 W0 d* j/ A. |2 V  n+ g& RI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
1 g4 G& X0 m' l6 O  }1 ]6 B0 h) aWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" j  ~9 ~) \* U) J  M+ V* b4 J9 AIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) W% Z1 f9 K( m% {2 ]4 d5 mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; y% r7 B/ [/ P* L0 H, REntrust my love within your heart
' S  Q- _) g* t! b) O8 t' G. {) g, ULove… just the word love
1 @+ W" d  d7 x% e7 PWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ H) k- Y9 `( l. Q# VI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- [# \* M# ^2 n+ PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 _' O# z  t0 x, yEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- @: Y( R$ n  [& PEntrust my love within your heart

3 O5 ~* J# ~. H- x3 d% D, A5 r* M[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 X% L" M& o$ y! X7 Z6 z4 n<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) b% p$ S8 `0 a9 B, a( ~<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, A4 m. ?/ B9 a% l  M9 d% T4 T<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 m2 }4 G6 Q& v& o6 A* a- W<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) R4 f1 A$ `# p( g<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  @4 Z. m5 t6 N3 ]; ?<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 A4 U2 O  j  F9 j- Z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 k% `: \8 {; u) ?<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; g( F) X5 q: b6 K( L0 A- P# [<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) j* l% l( O" q" X# p: F2 l<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: b2 i+ L) i  ], H! H) Q  K2 q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 Q( b+ p7 _+ d% x<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ S) }) B* l$ V9 z  u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 w9 h( n) o) k9 ^% M/ H+ E<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: M! i5 R7 W! X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! i2 l& [1 V$ f0 b" G4 Z* S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ m. {5 M' T  W- U3 \) ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 i* J- f. E- c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# k# Q: s: j, d  o  ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. N/ ^5 v$ h. R6 u8 N<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
' K  ~& C0 ]# w0 }6 j- C( f1 ?<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
& v: c* K9 {8 g7 G: U<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' C; }4 D8 O' v; p' [<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. \, B. c! f# @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 y, Y+ C6 y5 N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ a0 D8 ]* ?( w9 K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' m- @  e  x$ v. S0 W+ S( x( U; s  ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ `3 P; k0 ~$ i6 A! g8 w6 I. q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. L  F+ s* k) _" m9 B! a8 s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

6 i6 l; @$ c) G8 r这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& C2 p( K# B5 k6 V3 z5 B' L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ A2 v& q7 e5 J<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>