【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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: v! ^  {( [  I7 z1 U- q! ^我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 E5 w% n3 U, V3 E$ YThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; L7 m3 O1 M# A2 v2 S: hFrom the first moment we met,
% A# \: S+ M; e: x9 i: r) g$ O' i+ XI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
2 ?, ^( a' w) ?1 yBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- G& g3 V) N) F6 D  g; tI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
9 L# R& h! A+ Q% a+ p. F! i0 f; tWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 b7 o5 |; Y- \But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ l) c* m9 G+ ALove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# |  _/ U4 I1 ]$ d% p$ H1 }8 w  WBut I never did
# q  l9 D5 _  u: _' E( a; vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ e1 ]: H# K, g6 R; C( @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
4 C) }+ G. S/ [9 n$ n8 f" `- f$ NEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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0 {9 t# j# d, o( ?& G! e<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 I+ ^# Z  V. V. S3 C' g& q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  j. H1 R3 u& {6 `<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& y, n  F! I& U6 l2 @8 ~<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% i. H5 S' g8 h<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( K% Q/ a  ]+ z# d- U( O( r<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 W1 ?9 Z" g0 Q  h. v<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* F6 E$ \4 H7 w. D: h3 ~0 F<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: D% v# G. G1 G+ i0 V* |<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 G% ^- g+ _7 `6 I7 g<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, \  l8 ^/ e6 C# f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( f4 k9 {8 W0 ^7 n( w$ y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. M  b2 y* N8 X. H* V/ b<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
7 e, k/ j4 m  ]+ g4 e<P>但我不会</P>
, Z& \; s' M% ~9 a<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: a2 G  s1 m! f: R<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" [( i( n# w' e8 ?! |) m8 Y  w8 W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 v) w) x2 R. F" e4 \8 R1 M& J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) S. O9 ]+ x' z" y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, m) f( _5 W3 _8 u7 f9 \<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: Z" `" ]% \; K! V+ G+ ^: Q  X6 ^<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  B! I, e9 c: _) u; [" ^<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; N/ R) Q1 g0 L5 }4 p" o<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" ^- F' B( k2 u" f1 C- h<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( |6 A* B$ j8 r$ ?4 P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ A! y9 \+ t, A% F6 C<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 G* i1 O+ h% n) O<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, I; Q0 C4 x! a; R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ [6 t8 u$ n* D<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 y# m8 s, F: N, c3 I& d# V4 i  y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ z  }% M  y6 a<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>