【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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' G/ [4 s9 a3 m+ ?* u/ O我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 u0 ]& p8 I! H4 ]& R. ?From the first moment we met,
* M$ m+ G* R6 {7 N2 Q7 eI already loved you with all my heart
4 _& H, z; u/ n) |6 O( S( B9 c& HWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 S8 B7 w& M# V0 ]& K* l* Q9 qI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
2 h# @2 ~2 G& c/ P1 W& W, @# v, XWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ C: B: T9 Z$ q3 `If today isn’t too late,
) Q' Y; x# G0 m0 Y3 PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* Z( m' O8 z8 J( JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* d* W& @  V2 k+ ?7 k5 [1 g, \Entrust my love within your heart
" q( E$ N+ J! M. m1 WLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) ~5 ]8 x5 y! G0 W* VI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( k: k+ k/ f! J3 A4 O$ Z9 m$ XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 f7 e+ ]- @( CIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 W5 I) M: M+ d9 G$ p4 tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 v3 ]; ?% N' z3 f/ C9 ?9 g0 pCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
8 _0 ?4 e: g+ t+ e: AEntrust my love within your heart
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& h  I8 n4 |  m4 h) M[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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% V9 T1 k; S- h7 q+ l! \7 P5 ?# L<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' f/ R& `' \) x$ ?9 t' h. T<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. r# e$ R6 ]9 \& v, i) M$ r<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! V7 u- T( C5 t# T1 J" C7 p<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" b8 s  ^5 I+ q* j7 _. `<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 E6 `7 q* D8 ~5 o- c3 ?3 k<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 j+ W" {: ^( w7 |, Y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  X* u2 a, h& W, ~( Q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 O6 L5 m, j" p5 Y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ E; F! q$ J3 p6 w/ h! z; V<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: }6 z4 J: N/ [" ?  E1 I<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 \1 m  L$ R  E0 z  l) a4 z% T) G<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; V$ ~& l! _  C" r9 F6 F+ ]<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* M1 j$ z* E, d  V! A. l% w- S9 E<P>但我不会</P>
! B) v. e- i) E% Z+ `<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' V" [. {# E) F+ U6 C* |; m  u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; ]# M" N" l9 @# L# d" l+ S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 d( Q) U1 g5 Z6 p: j+ U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 ^! I/ [/ E2 H1 M9 D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ C; o2 I/ o9 \9 P<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: ~  D  N" d! [<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ X9 Q$ r8 E7 Z. f6 p! U7 ^/ T<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 r2 \  k  p9 L% d; B; j( w<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; h9 @4 J. z  r6 j5 I: }<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
* l- W1 G9 ?5 r  y$ T: j<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& S4 z* v% M2 c7 p8 O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: S9 `* q9 |7 ]1 r8 m- p% U<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 @  s# ?) a' G4 V' Q1 ?( a  z4 q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& O8 y. P1 q" t0 ~. o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: ^2 E0 P, ^5 z8 r7 V6 Y( x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ v, l! P# \+ d/ y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* M5 r0 B6 L+ D, X" S: ^+ {; F$ O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 }; E% |! N! i+ |5 |: J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 v5 \* ?0 b) b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>