【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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7 ]4 ~0 X, K4 s7 f1 S" j我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
; @2 ^! c+ c5 b2 HBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
6 `( E: G: q5 D5 B% XWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ Z% H& t& u$ _: P% x/ aI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 z: c8 h/ E; x# F! R( z( f1 KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 S$ H  |: h: _. t4 K& ?* SI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" l4 s/ B; B5 H9 g2 o% G9 mCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
" H9 h8 t8 L& X7 B& S! uWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
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4 V4 Y5 D. X& T; K0 VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 u# M) a& ?5 XIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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6 \, x2 L/ Y. ?, a' d, s, H[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" ^1 A) D4 f4 Y4 ?6 G' l' a, G+ M9 ~<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! A7 F. |4 ^! D/ V0 S<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 A8 H. u: N3 q# z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 O% ?* b1 r3 e* u1 x3 O0 E<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# S' d, Q2 j4 ^: s7 W8 n& C+ g<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! u4 n) r: w, U: C<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 H5 W: Y1 J5 G0 z! R9 @% H<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 \. a3 o* S1 x' }3 Z* ^<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  S8 k! ]# N/ S. O5 I5 c<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 o( |+ N% U, B# i% `3 U$ }% x8 Y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 U/ F; V9 S% T<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ E, S5 F, q' T% H: E<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 P1 R2 b* |8 x1 |# r3 B  H<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
  |- Z' \8 P. @* e( j<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 ^) x1 q$ @- d. F7 \) e" a<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 ?# U8 z/ x2 L9 L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ A$ _6 B" F9 p/ T, S$ Z1 p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  Z- w, A, T4 e$ \! @<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ m5 g% o/ I! c6 k& f<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 e# |7 ^. M4 ?% D- x1 h  w$ C<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' f: E) b) W8 A1 ^, D0 ?, z4 Q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, E2 V, \0 X0 e<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
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<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* Q3 }) {# s7 R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) N& k5 ?" J; l<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 |: d8 I, f/ U" ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! L9 @3 i. y' L- S% r& n7 g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) I5 E& _! H* n: N2 A, o6 A" v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 B9 x+ W* `; ^- g3 N8 b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( A9 m7 e9 t7 e) G- y0 f: N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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" R6 F3 D) c! ~" W3 p9 A这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 K( l: ^( S+ |/ n<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( r8 ~& v2 r/ L+ u1 i<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>