【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' I8 P. e) ]1 s+ iI would probably know how you feel
7 s8 l8 |4 o( p5 wLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# J1 z" G- L9 g# jBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& u+ \+ m! Y+ e( m/ hIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& H8 U( g/ e6 V1 P( GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' e: N( K' h" |5 h7 D" CCan I entrust it to you?
& b9 k4 M. j& M, [Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& V5 f- U( T3 U7 Q" g* J7 f( rI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 @/ ^/ ?7 S/ L5 I* J! E" CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% r! L5 N' }& c7 ^1 A; zEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
' e2 i, a" F* ?% F6 j+ P) ~9 yEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

' c' ?* F/ H8 _  e6 J  a<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; ]- T8 _6 ?' ]$ z4 x& w. J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 F. z; R$ K( j( R<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 C4 A7 ]1 W. r4 z' k9 i<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( q; }9 Y* s- w, B3 k5 T<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ ?# m  |0 W+ o! u0 O<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* L7 ~8 {; T+ y- L2 e, Q, b9 \<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. v% P3 D. u0 S- k# E  G# s<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; u" x8 S! I0 d7 R' A<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- }4 z8 |: x* m% K2 `2 S' a7 c<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 n2 i# P  y7 A+ Z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' [9 I3 j+ C7 l+ C  C1 M' D0 b/ U& n<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% B" h6 M) M; p: r$ f' `1 S<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" o2 \% O' `" m/ F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 ]& \. h& \; y9 v  f! v- E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- @7 p( d) `! Y7 V+ M+ x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- R( _" m9 A- H5 U3 @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 b- f$ ~& a5 d& V1 Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( i% P+ D& F, ]# G$ x  C5 e- X<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 A: X( E4 P0 \% m# s. k<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 V& L5 N% H, z- @5 k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 u+ X# A0 M9 C<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 e0 m# W7 K* t& u6 p; H$ i" v1 d0 p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 t5 e7 E' _0 K: G3 K1 Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* h- X5 F6 t2 }8 n5 t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: F- h1 j, q% {2 j8 z* Q; q6 p<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! ~# j" u8 z( X& h' ^* x, X: [3 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 ?1 \2 b5 z: V9 {% O3 Z( p<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 v! Z  H) j/ j2 W<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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: U; ?, Z9 f8 E* Y2 M% ^' H 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 r/ j" W* a( x/ O3 o; f, }这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, `# m' M- o. j" T0 F& t$ z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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' I+ N0 E, E" n" M' t4 Z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>