【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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6 F( P/ L# E; D. V# |0 |我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' L" O* x5 r2 o( e! r* NI would probably know how you feel
0 e  X0 V1 s) Y/ WLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 D! L6 @" N% O7 |# OI want to confess that I love you,
0 E+ Z+ y+ S! x1 e$ NBut I never did
' n: i5 J# w; j, b. MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 D6 J/ p! X, p' @If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* A( S9 q/ t6 l1 x3 S  ^9 oEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) e- X5 j; _/ {5 R- k3 yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ @2 m3 V  `8 }( y+ s; J0 zCan I entrust it to you?
) e& b- v9 m: w/ t& l! [% zEntrust my love within your heart
  J9 u& ~# q3 n. y3 _2 |Can I entrust it to you?
1 ]4 |1 `& ~: A5 X, tEntrust my love within your heart
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1 K4 q+ u, v1 `+ b0 P4 S0 }[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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3 M3 y& b0 p5 W7 R0 A0 [6 L% G<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ I+ a1 z* O" R" E! V4 \( Y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" T* e$ B, }$ c. K3 _. @<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, ^" C3 o0 L( Q- b4 N<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 v* W+ B% \! }4 s<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 w" ]' H% O5 u+ M" V- M<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; I, U& o8 z/ r; g0 v  l<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 x' z9 e8 ~& N& _: J/ s<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 G" K! e( j  Y% I8 t6 r<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 r9 b  c1 z; W7 m$ }<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- w1 a6 }) m, I. _, h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 k# ?. s/ f  ^, r5 Z, r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 W/ S* \2 h3 F- q, S" e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ a0 K, z" Y1 Z; P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& G# [5 B/ Z. f" k. w  B) Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* l, y' J4 Z; `* |; J<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; D3 ?% V0 }/ S) P; S<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) a: z$ d' Q+ c& v6 P9 K, g<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' }8 f+ b% b4 |3 M9 R<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 O2 A& n5 f' n# [- z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) E7 k7 r8 Y) b( W$ y# ~<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 x& s0 K2 C, ]; v9 G/ i- o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ e9 ^2 h, s/ g, v: w# Z2 a. @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 v) J; p$ G! D6 X3 X! Q6 V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, i- U6 Z4 K& g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( g7 }" t' ]8 j6 U这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>