【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% ]# m) J9 g6 g3 l- {/ N6 W( x% qThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' f' P# k; ^' a$ C7 C/ kFrom the first moment we met,
0 B1 O$ h2 ?) j. Z/ TI already loved you with all my heart
9 h) y" T2 G2 P2 rWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, x$ p6 J0 M/ f; i% |) t0 E. bIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% {( |% S8 }( U8 _4 |I would probably know how you feel
. N2 }3 z: k( |+ oLove… just the word love
9 |& r$ X& N; N5 uWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* }1 [8 i0 i; t# k+ B, ]/ V5 JBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" U5 T& e5 G3 `. M( N: W; f$ KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 J  l- k4 `; n( Q" L$ _8 _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 L7 X8 b+ f/ P! H3 F; X' D7 zCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( o) S0 F6 @6 g& XLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# X" p% T. R9 O- E: y# @But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" R3 y$ a; g0 o! V( e1 V& fI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! U* I1 x/ B6 g9 _: uI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! Z5 l0 g+ F& P/ }& h9 wEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
3 R* }$ l9 P/ t  y4 p) Q; [Entrust my love within your heart

0 |* z' f, }: ]( J, w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 b% a5 V) k" V9 G2 q! J<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 h6 |$ H" G# T: i0 ]/ u5 h' V0 o( {) G<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 g6 p" V& v7 o- Z: a" C: G$ a<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 h; A' J" U" {( s0 a0 G<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: z; E2 s, T5 n& N( p! T3 `<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 Z; c4 q6 }7 J: n9 x4 c: Y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) m- Y( R4 e- b- y& _" W2 P<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ r5 \5 \  Q# ]% j9 e<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 N$ f  t, Q. s  r* }<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  D  y# I9 k, P% u1 P' R<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 x- j& V* M! ~1 N! v' b<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- n; |& a/ j+ Q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) S- x* o8 e! e6 }7 \6 s<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! a3 J3 [0 E" o! t# j% o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; Q6 j6 z6 M' w* O0 {/ z2 e* |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 D, E5 O& j0 d& ?0 c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 @% T* V8 c; T3 Y9 W- S<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 g( L/ m1 A4 T9 B+ H# T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 I/ D; \+ h  m5 t# Q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- I! f; m( p! S, J  N& y3 U7 P/ L' i<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 S( K, [4 C  h! B8 L<P>But I never did </P>
5 ]: e2 j  M3 U" M/ _$ J" g- a) d<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: e, f# o* }- O" v<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 D4 D) s; A0 u; ]<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; g( Z; Y5 D( W" l<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. d9 [# L  r2 P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 k! R' a. g# E2 J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 c& i3 r$ m. z8 M2 f3 f4 ]+ H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! x6 U$ w6 w2 C# h6 D' t2 K% b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% t' Y* |( a5 W* o<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 j/ h  x9 v4 W- r0 k" Y6 W4 p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ @, A' A# p$ B. S3 q9 g; P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ E9 t2 H- U1 v. p7 I) t: \这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( D5 ~/ \+ B" J0 M- x6 s<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>