【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
  w9 D; E* L5 [+ s1 v1 lThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
5 }: p, N. x; w- O, \& ]I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 {) ?5 I/ P% vIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 W. w/ y3 U: O& K4 z) y9 BI would probably know how you feel
. g  |$ h+ X' o' }9 I* kLove… just the word love
* @+ L' v3 A/ ^. m; eWhy is it so difficult to express?
* |; Y% F- N1 OI want to confess that I love you,
; U+ H5 C6 ~4 t) m! o- zBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. q0 U) i/ u* ?. }, t9 P. [If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 {7 N" U2 ~8 B1 Q" l8 h5 [0 SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 _1 |2 g1 h$ i4 OWhy is it so difficult to express?
! j: r4 p. h' E- pI want to confess that I love you,
7 L4 k" c% I9 ^$ WBut I never did
, x1 h! G9 r8 xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- W  R9 b1 n1 T( cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 a, \) s* T  U1 u/ y$ qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 l* f. V" U& q- y; w* ^Can I entrust it to you?
7 D0 S8 l% }* U% E" i  O" m7 WEntrust my love within your heart
. Q# g9 ^1 p; v/ K" `) q; ?
[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

1 H3 k; G- E0 v3 x* Y7 c+ x8 P* e
" r! U1 P; X( k<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) z0 e" y) x2 d, ^2 B! Q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& Z. s; S9 f- i# K<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, y! z& h, E% P6 L0 R3 y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( D! f+ W: \7 A5 C! W9 D- E0 S<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, V. v7 o5 P7 e1 a<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 c" I  [$ f1 ]" F4 X" U<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 A1 V+ Z/ ?8 x/ t% A3 F% ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 ~) ]9 U% [% f% ~<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% N1 h" j; ^& B<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 a7 m% f: D4 U" D" M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ L! X$ g' ?: V0 K9 J<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 r& H* ^# |+ I  P<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' W1 A! m, A% M; j# s8 }6 y3 B1 m<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ ~3 m$ I) t' N9 a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. _7 [: w* n) e8 ~* k+ ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' n6 \6 _* u1 l5 H3 i' n5 a# R<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  I- C% A8 }: O( f, ~8 d" d8 e/ t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, Y) F* X" n- I  K5 F- ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 Z) d" M& x' K8 s<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  o" E6 G/ X" V$ l0 b) w<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 w  M% I1 n5 _, I1 o: S<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. N9 x8 P4 d! O$ k2 b! t<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, z1 N  H) L0 B! Q3 ^! }2 ?. j& G) |<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ a% u; V6 s  F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* Q! p/ e9 ]; z/ w7 h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: K8 Q* T9 F8 d; d/ g& G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. \( }5 ^. b! I3 ~  b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 F5 m/ y% H  @3 Y1 \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 p6 s/ ?0 w  N$ K
( g( o& \# z, p( z- T" h# T 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
! q* `' @3 Q9 A" x( \
/ m1 F( q$ N" q+ }这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. i0 L+ U- q/ U0 A% w<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>