【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  l' ?7 s$ V0 ]! A. p  kThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
  _- c) t! @( a7 f2 DWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
0 Y& D1 o* N% u6 E. ?" GLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; l* m: o; O( m1 x# H1 HI want to confess that I love you,
6 h8 y  \# u. y( GBut I never did
  r! ^' H/ [/ Y  v, @. KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; e7 X# L; W; q2 k/ r, TIf today isn’t too late,
1 z5 y3 R7 H/ F- y8 MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( ~8 Z$ v  K) L5 f/ X9 n3 lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 \6 Q" A1 Z/ W  j! PEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 c/ h6 [' z* `1 bI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 \. L8 \  s  M( ?2 A) x3 xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. x4 ^0 d* f* ~" z$ l/ RIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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2 g, |5 y' r0 R: k3 ]. b<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
. }2 e- C/ k  I& a* }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 G( a) p6 ?4 f+ }* B7 y7 ~, w4 C5 Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 Y* S- y, R5 n) r5 u2 Y9 M<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 {' J. o/ Z% U/ N' x9 ^: }: x<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
! C5 E, N# |0 u; b; K0 @2 c<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# L3 c7 {/ e* z2 _9 @, A' ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: R9 l3 S4 ~! k9 N& ]0 n& K7 A<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 t6 a+ V0 d* a( |1 V4 y6 r& U<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- ?2 l1 w! C5 }& D' `+ s$ H+ {3 X<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 Y! @4 d1 B7 C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& v7 V/ w& R! P( {<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 P7 K6 _. O* r4 Y1 X<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ m- n8 u5 f0 p( N5 r& \) v<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ m. a3 R, \; E6 O<P>但我不会</P>
- P: q, x; ~# W2 R6 j- R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) _4 G' n( v6 F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 X4 J# o, K' Z5 I* r! g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. t8 R) n! M& b  ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* B5 V7 g3 a: c! ?9 r7 ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 V4 H8 r! s) @' y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( a$ D" ~+ b# Y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 ]1 N, Z, O, `* }/ n<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* A3 S% r3 D, d1 ~; X: ]<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 E; V+ q- o" r1 Q. g! l& m: u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# l6 `, {, K. `/ C<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: o$ @( b# t$ i+ @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' h7 B  G2 d5 B- `' H8 r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 A1 x5 J6 G8 B0 g7 l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 W5 J. Y2 X3 ?, H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 H/ d' F  u: J4 d+ s% n- ]" y) [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( F! I# _/ z+ P2 k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 Z6 ?8 |3 d1 T3 v8 Z% W: X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 y5 r. M+ b9 T$ `# p# l5 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ s! W7 a) K' b  X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 K1 G( g; C- e 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 [" N% ^* ?0 x. x& X( I这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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