【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. S5 V' n9 j! X1 u* f5 u, \歌词我附在后面。
2 o8 T5 K: r, g; MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; U! c6 y5 N; x' D3 FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( L8 Z  w4 _, ^" D2 Y* j( v, @( BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) p: ]) r7 n3 R9 K/ y( x/ j) z3 XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" U: I' A" g0 USeeing the sky content with its love
  ~) Z7 r" P* C/ [1 VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' w/ O9 V& d+ H/ ~0 NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 {6 a, Q1 y* A  w: k+ d: |Every other word you utter is love
' o0 L7 `) m) Q! M" K% qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ l) B- s8 u$ x$ W, q& SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" i# X4 q, Q+ q9 sI want so much to see inside your heart
+ z3 d6 d! l  z- dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, K0 N, D; R: [; c/ l) }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 I/ U9 Y# R/ _$ II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; s' L' U5 i9 ?- s* v# x2 @) b3 zWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" R! ?' y1 Y: uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" v( G& c( @6 V. f! P4 C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 B/ F  |9 k! P1 N% o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' C$ @: o9 F4 Z9 d6 j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 P9 c1 r# L- Y1 l8 X$ N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" u1 A" T! N8 Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ I* Y- \5 F4 h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, Y# R5 d4 o* d. v3 q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# O0 t  g: |: Y, y, `# [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 O% E& w/ [0 u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; R; S' v* V) ^* i) m/ E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 U: A: z+ u: W8 P) \% n3 W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 w- e% O/ g% p6 J' q. l" j! e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 E/ Q" d+ y: b3 i9 h# a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 M. h) F8 i6 Q9 a& n' o; _8 W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' v; N4 P! D9 k" C) X! I- D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ w0 J' _7 v8 O3 M" i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 M. n. K; x8 z4 V" c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- n# ~& H! S* U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: E/ J# n: x4 `+ i6 E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) p% n! |4 E+ Q$ ^3 \7 n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* S' ]+ M" l- v4 D) O$ r- ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 A1 J' f1 ^$ \" O5 n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 |: E$ D4 ~: t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 L( r& j. L6 k0 \2 K( i1 P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! B9 n2 E% d  t; \- l/ }* R' O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ {! e  ]0 `+ H, a! J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; B7 [+ ?$ G) H6 c# E3 k, U# ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" y. _# D9 f, i# `, B  G' v2 _$ K, \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>