【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: |7 O( d( @. e3 e: p: }; i歌词我附在后面。
* {5 D3 O5 N8 w; b7 C; RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ X7 }' {3 _9 V  j$ v" ?5 ?% aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( N/ S& [" x7 W% z; @The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! u% O# R+ N0 ]9 a! c- E8 Q/ WSeeing the sky content with its love
! D+ A- C) D/ n" F2 _1 dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 [* R) d' p2 [- O# SYou needn’t fear anything
0 ^6 t6 _1 K% a2 N8 RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. |- {- ^& ^0 N' S" a" Y$ t, ]$ @. FEvery other word you utter is love
5 a9 y- ~; S0 u0 T2 Y+ K( P8 c7 HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- q$ C" c4 e& K5 ANothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) D# p/ j3 L0 S' c; ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& R. O& J' s0 t4 J3 yI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 |; n- @' Z3 T( I( U0 [' r* zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  `3 U* V$ w' e( E2 D, l+ AWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 [5 [) x- Y# a+ a- \& w: CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ F% T% k! u7 S4 z6 S; H2 K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ p  Z. i6 b* w. z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. Z  e. }! @+ o8 f2 a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 M2 G: P6 U, f7 i" y8 Y6 \2 W/ p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& X# W+ G: ~5 |, K9 D( o1 d3 I" Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ }/ T; S& L) K* j& o0 J1 l2 v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- K! h- ?/ f# {3 p& G2 R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ _  r" V" |$ r* F/ q<P>你无需担心</P>
. X5 i0 G: j; w2 x. f& s# }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; c# L# s; D% \9 @, J* [& G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' V$ Z% V3 z4 z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 c$ ^  a% t- j3 S5 C5 [5 V* V6 O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  m- k$ W  A! S5 i1 @3 a( J- |; C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; U+ T4 i1 w. ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 K& x; Y4 k5 j% S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 @' c6 A) O0 G! K9 C& E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ Z4 l$ l" H; b1 ?1 h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 u- x' J# b4 x; \5 X7 K( V4 X  B0 r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 c7 L- W4 r' N2 j, Q( i& v2 w% q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 c+ E: C( T' ]- v2 [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 Q0 I. R$ s/ O3 Z, @: a; D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! M- u1 W9 H8 Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 j" n& E9 V* h2 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! R5 \3 b1 G7 G3 o( y" ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>