【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" ^' E( K( A# A" {8 `* y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 r" B7 ?' |2 U) C0 l% L4 ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# Z6 y4 c: C! S: G# n" l5 X, I& u# NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! t: |: Z3 m0 _  @  k; {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# [& N$ a; z4 J! b( \; kSeeing the sky content with its love
$ V, y0 A, l% z, C% s0 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 ?4 |, K) @& D, SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- b. V& J" |0 T8 sEvery other word you utter is love
- e; k4 L' M; `. J1 }9 I8 A7 \" xI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, y& S& _, ?8 RNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- d% p$ z4 u4 X9 o5 aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ g: ^. c8 @* n4 tI want so much to see inside your heart
# @- V- g+ V1 N+ U- d( ]6 _. M" WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. z6 F! u+ U/ tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 U8 V  K, v1 eI regret not dying
/ X8 w  |  g- _( C$ kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 b- I2 t8 H" L1 jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- A: c' H5 G' s9 w* m- }6 g# B5 e' XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& G% a4 f; Z, n( z0 T' l& x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' F0 G0 o8 n& ~* j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ H  k0 w2 J$ g# H) [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. M  S& x0 w& n/ f* P% a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 i) b; n% X: L; j' S6 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 m* d8 v1 `+ A- |0 o- z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 B( |6 S9 b& i3 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 n$ C5 O# H$ y6 N% I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 [: D9 h- i+ F: Q. i0 Y  q9 E9 {<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# G! @9 e( I  q! P* H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 P4 v# O5 z7 A6 M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* f/ O( `) i7 p+ n5 g0 M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 G% A3 \( j. |8 r! w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ s9 R. ]7 n1 ~: H+ P/ K, u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% N6 W! W" A8 }0 u; q' o! g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 w, Z. m$ M" x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 ]; B0 c! X1 U0 d3 i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" C2 g/ {' v; C, O1 Q. n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* S) _" V5 E& k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 C; y' K% |' m; K7 x7 Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ E! \2 x" W) R: \<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. T1 P% l4 S+ P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: D9 W7 `1 i: F, r9 ^- @+ q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, \& v# m# {, _. ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 g5 J2 ~" t) D% J7 X) u# `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 M2 ?7 _  b/ g7 v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 a3 _* {) q7 |# Q* k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

  G2 H; T% X" e3 v( s% a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>