【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% c, G% C9 g# {7 }The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 @) \$ ?( v$ {  I( a' g/ n" [Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 M$ h$ m0 d% X' I- L+ A, |) lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 j1 n" \$ r! ~- ~The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% d6 t) U: C. G- ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 ?/ f! |, w! _" \I really want to know just how much you love me
. @; p) O0 J( \- o- L3 w9 ^I love you I love you with all my heart
, g4 M: G2 X. [5 D0 |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 u7 {1 G" P% e' ?0 q" VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ E1 z1 M4 O6 {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 F! A( n' D) P1 Y& ^: M5 `2 MI regret not dying
) V. Z" X3 _2 A4 _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 B4 f. J8 ?9 m  z: ]" ]" WWith such a tongue as yours,
  n2 g: r# o# z/ B8 @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ s6 B' g# j. E' x; j& @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  v$ J& f! E- J2 ~3 I' i$ u- ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ p/ ], C: A5 ]/ P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( s  b; s7 C2 R4 s) P# f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 G' |  R1 p) W" R: Z6 ?  Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 b' a; r  d* N* Y: i9 M9 s- _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; N8 L' z: m2 W4 ^  e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 W2 U& n  ^( Z1 X% J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 h; N2 v5 R5 y- p, U' R4 }! m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  i  S5 w" A' l/ F/ k1 p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" [+ g8 |( U7 t5 Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 r; l9 F/ C* ]  y7 A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 [7 P" o2 M  P; C2 x9 _* `# ?. K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 a+ d2 L6 o8 V% J0 I<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! o6 @& l" T' O7 @1 a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 ?7 q) w; x# s3 W# T$ l1 k" h) F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 d9 C" R& H5 z" _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. [2 m: Z  r: o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# O! o4 y4 i. \$ U$ d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 ]) H/ d; W9 o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# L# V  C  ?* x! c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ g' S- ~. w1 {' _4 m1 }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; G% u0 _4 W6 j# g! ^* V9 x9 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ {1 h* o6 F6 N- w3 h" [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ d7 }- z' R9 k; p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- Z' A6 X: ^5 S  Z2 f+ s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 B* e8 a2 J3 Q4 @7 {, o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 s/ J# I! U. e9 v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 o/ S% c! |" \2 h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* i5 M# L" r% a( s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 N$ i/ b9 U' z4 R+ n- @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) r" s, B# V$ V- e% Z. a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 J2 k  \4 y, l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( l. f! h" W' m6 X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! a! i7 p6 j2 d  n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 z7 J; G0 B* ?% s1 U+ @  S6 J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  I" M/ ?5 b4 _% Z我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, H! b% V; U+ V5 n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>