【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 A& ]* \* g9 m  M# Y2 x) KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# T' N( D$ i! l1 r* HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# F7 U9 q* X, _5 @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) e8 g% o# d; E" |; {/ FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 U1 b6 U0 b' i8 rI love you I love you with all my heart
- `  ~5 d4 z1 c0 l+ y% L( `* jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% h! g& Y  S+ w# R: z1 k* i* o- YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 u) v8 y/ H# AI want so much to see inside your heart
% v) j5 B# P8 hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 b7 N( D- P- o3 GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; ^+ d6 d# f5 e( W8 ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ X9 _. w/ e9 |( K8 O" F$ t: t) H, ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 w1 M+ q: l! o5 c6 z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 y' G6 {% v# W1 j% X/ p6 [, S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" o* y5 D; M9 r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; ]* C. {5 d& w& S0 O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 M- k, z. M! v/ R  y5 }5 T, O% v! R  _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ y; i& [, ]! Y9 j$ N, @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 w4 G  O+ r, C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 B, d8 e' f' ]% D/ j) ^% ]; `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& W" o- ?2 R9 F& T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) Y7 d# W7 H7 ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 c7 `) F% X" s6 O; [<P>你无需担心</P>
  k1 R. n1 {$ v) I5 w# U& b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- F( k# d5 }& R' G6 n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ j" ?& f3 g" I8 J8 Y" e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 t' z2 z4 R( m3 ?( L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 A+ @6 s, q, m% x5 F7 c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 l* D& D# h  Q" Z; J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 ]9 V# U/ V2 u& B3 p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 A' K) X" Y3 n8 i; V7 Q. ]/ s# G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; O" S5 E7 x! |9 h/ C+ M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 X' y! F, A: _% N0 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( c% W  o+ d  ]1 l" J! z4 J. ]" b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ N2 p: `# T' ~7 a8 B  F& \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" s- b7 l1 u5 R% P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! l7 B5 W4 v0 w! H" B5 e7 \& q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" @# D, ]- `  Z$ P" d: s+ W2 w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- n4 P6 d, @- Y" U( S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( |3 w+ T6 n& x+ Y- Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 b, W2 V0 H+ G! d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, q" h# W! a! h  |+ v0 X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

1 d! F' E7 m8 Z9 H, ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>