【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ `' a0 s# D: E- n0 k, ]- ?. U$ W歌词我附在后面。
( `2 i# _# s  ]& W! w# BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 R% Q8 T$ T2 m) `* R3 S& m3 oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: w8 X" G9 w/ D5 TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ w/ r4 ^. [( l2 B! CYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: ~' t! T# [0 _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# F* q$ i3 e* m3 m: h' t0 @I love you I love you with all my heart
. v+ l- C& O0 l, w# Q  JNothing can compare to my love
% S9 j; ^' ?: C, }9 ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' q7 d) X$ G- \# d9 @) f8 }9 u5 bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 h* U1 x; \  C4 t, P/ dI’m still filled with fear
/ n( V0 N" d9 S' {) yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* s' ^% f% A3 ~2 {7 I( n+ d$ vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 m3 K) ~! }  _9 aWith such a tongue as yours,
1 c2 V  X6 f4 U* k% G0 |) EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 ?, V! ?' @0 `( y) v2 A  R7 xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" Q+ C) [; |" r/ vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( I& f4 g* o0 E) I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 O4 |7 p7 i' [* [( x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 ?! J0 x1 L  N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# k7 c& I1 `6 L& L. A. I( [6 n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! W8 }" x! v9 c6 q, Q+ W4 y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! `. V* q  P" u- |; s" t+ e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, Q9 E4 A+ m9 S$ q. y/ p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 g* q; O; v" j! K5 ?$ @) ]0 G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: _4 Z" k' K" M3 L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# M4 a* L2 R2 n2 g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ G6 G& V% A: I9 S8 O4 U, \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* c* p( @: o3 A/ }% [) E: q$ I8 E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 @6 n: f: M$ w* l5 {4 u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# f9 Q  v1 a5 y5 ~& b: }( n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* p7 h- _! V! ]( C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 y- s/ j/ o) t% X" B" e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ |2 t! p+ ?4 o6 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 d1 T# d: ]; G5 d3 R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ _) g: O- D4 L& d/ _8 v) n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 {' ], y' i+ B/ b; E9 C1 r& ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 x; e3 U' j5 R0 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 v; r& a: ?0 @4 {' s+ g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" N! N7 p$ a1 h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' P: P% v  @( ~) t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. D2 B9 p- _2 Z2 m# j3 V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 r  l1 D6 b7 G! |4 i: D$ C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; E% i8 \) p3 T4 |: G$ S3 q6 Q1 f# _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 Q$ A/ t# b+ p" E8 @6 X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 c, y4 X5 s4 E1 W2 s9 _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ d. ~1 `+ H4 t+ E: S9 _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% [6 ]  L  {$ z3 x  P$ `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 s# X4 N% ^" |8 U6 y) u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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$ I" }: G7 f$ n- H: q; a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ |) B/ y+ v" f2 v$ `7 x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>