【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
2 T  ^7 w& c' @! c4 r1 c
1 O" }# z3 j) N. B- y& z
歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( m  x6 Y3 ^. c7 H( z5 fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- w3 u' r% n" eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  V9 h) O4 n; w5 f  a& ]9 UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) V6 t" V+ N  m* t3 `" aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, }+ \2 Y9 z$ o3 NEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  k  W! }: V! h9 UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: ?5 j; s( [5 E, o1 h: V; @: ?3 _9 kI want so much to see inside your heart
+ ^" m  |1 U' c- j, R. Q2 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ q' Q/ `4 i! Y, H3 jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# n9 K4 a* i9 V* ~5 [6 m$ SI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# ^! h: m& ^7 U0 P  y5 ?! S8 i  KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: e  x, b" Z0 Q& i! v+ U: VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 b+ k% @( F5 n9 D0 p# tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, s0 @7 l: k( L5 i: G/ D9 f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% ?) t6 n) O) S5 j  Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 y; m8 K7 t4 X; J8 e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ d. c. N1 V5 Q) U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' v! d8 G; Z/ I; j8 l* [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 ~2 R) h$ R! w- ^$ K8 G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 g% }4 }* U! n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" D% \& c! y/ y- S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 V9 ~/ A4 d. j* V9 `" e) b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- b. ^& T7 c, a7 }" F( W* ^. x% Y<P>你无需担心</P>
# z3 y3 U/ ?& i3 a1 v# M1 P0 g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 e2 W( z2 \1 Y) r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! L& k0 W% r& m( J9 f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; E& q! t4 L" W. Y* ?: W4 ~% @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: T, \5 y$ [0 f$ k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 M8 ]: T* w  V$ y( t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 A! x) F9 h/ W, t$ n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 H  r% n5 i# ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 O$ q4 E1 b% ]7 K# k- M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  @: D8 Y1 F  a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# b9 q4 g& [2 x3 A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! D4 s, C. Y- h& t4 t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 f7 N' z, O, l7 h+ v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# Z: d1 i" @  }1 z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& S+ b: ^7 C" p( Q* J. B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 ?2 C. E/ _- ?( r7 o% O2 Q" o0 [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. g3 V  c& Q, c) z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( R7 `! `" j4 H  ?+ i( E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& ?/ l# G' T( j) f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
6 ^! J: s3 j$ r
我请你剖开它
' s* e3 Q% H) F+ C
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>