【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& [8 e$ h, t9 x) f8 P) P0 e' bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: V- D5 l+ [& y' C: [( [1 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
. ^* |/ \; ]; {With the moon kissing it every night
- ^% h2 F. g2 I5 q- e8 ZSeeing the sky content with its love
8 |' d7 k0 O  B( A0 M5 hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 R- w* `, J+ L$ d, x0 O# Q: BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: k: a, |0 j! @I really want to know just how much you love me
& c! m' B  r  Z6 S; z# u! ]; wI love you I love you with all my heart
- t( U" I& ^, y. k+ ^Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 ?; E) m4 B6 h. x6 WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 ]" N" Z: u) C8 W9 bI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! r9 d( Y' z1 Z& GI’m still filled with fear
' }) F, Y. W8 X/ f" }! l: ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 X9 V& o8 s7 O/ B4 tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. ]+ D0 ?- |5 N1 @With such a tongue as yours,
% F# A3 X7 w" \0 r' {: tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 ?% z7 ~3 B: O4 Q& l7 @; KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( e: L2 Q3 F  X& r( c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, ~2 `1 X+ Y7 h1 O! `& ^! L! \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  y6 Z3 R, B4 |) V8 d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 a- m9 |: Z% J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 }7 h  }& @5 c6 O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: X0 Y0 E) V! n4 M: C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. _* Z2 ?% M% O; u1 l" @9 q, L7 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- V2 v! C4 n, N# N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 @! |1 q, M2 ~/ D! Y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( J; q3 d' M  E, E% _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 {, A( {1 Q3 f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" K  Z) l7 T2 C4 D4 ]( {7 z5 y6 C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% D* t" V; K# _( r2 S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. a: w$ T9 z+ i0 p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! R# o; h& l- ?9 F6 t0 ?. B; M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  U; E6 j) e0 ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 J1 N$ K& t5 e& z( Z9 v% b8 c: C# n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ v0 N' m5 q8 v* p9 ^0 s7 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 F' J+ R0 y' d* g8 }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 C# J9 S& \/ a' \6 O6 e<P>I regret not dying</P>
* M9 t5 V: y5 n) F# K! ^% v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" r2 ?1 c; W- C) ^3 V2 R3 C: p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. z, Y. k+ A1 r7 c; H) u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' g5 X4 k1 o1 S" ?0 y' ?% i1 U+ c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' s. |6 ~& w1 q( p8 b2 X3 P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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7 B, O+ `/ _( |) { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>