【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 @- J2 }+ A# W, ~, n: h歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ x6 S: @8 j0 c: L+ HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ S& x, L  ]8 u: a0 G3 b8 pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 _& z: X" y  U9 lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, g+ j9 Y2 H: e& Z+ vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. k: u; G0 P! y6 S, C  O3 SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  x% ~! P, x% h* B+ f5 ^Every other word you utter is love
5 _; E# X; q3 n, lI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( |8 ]3 _2 B5 q3 RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 t; a9 A' Q! v+ @' VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; O7 {7 b: A" y6 W1 H6 F- ]I regret not dying
$ j% L# V2 o% s3 A" vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: {( _6 ?6 v- F+ mWith such a tongue as yours,
* p! }5 S* h  @( `8 u2 PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  P# _6 K: Y) _- q! n4 bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ s+ n1 v- z$ N) R- _+ ~) ?/ J8 kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 ]% h% Q; ]6 Y& g! [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 Y1 Q  s& q7 F7 U( `: [) m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 D/ t, I. g: Z' j, P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: a# F4 Y" F+ V. [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: Y/ E4 U! n4 P/ c/ f' H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; M1 Y9 t3 }! A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 Q) y* B9 ^# @# @9 Z" G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ H$ P# {6 f% M( z" W4 |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 a& z6 ]5 B& o% m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* H; J* `1 ]3 ~* d7 d0 Z+ A2 e( I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; G) L0 d" \  t9 L5 |' q1 p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 h# r/ \: p  J5 ~$ ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ o2 B9 n% I: Q) I; o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# l% C0 n+ [5 e& R$ M" L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 P4 d1 x% E+ c9 H+ m( i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( E8 P. d8 X& P  O! Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) ?$ i/ w2 |8 l6 C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# H& Z: C' y( Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& b" [& b: Q- l& j9 I6 U& k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  u& C/ x4 c. t/ q3 O6 o# V/ f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% H0 S. K4 }) I1 F8 v6 j) I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ H: F( N5 ~4 s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: e! ?- A! ]4 R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ J3 M/ h3 L0 k- h! w! v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 R  |3 M- z4 D; P<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 b" J/ i0 V. h5 K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  d5 d+ ?# M7 r0 U6 g, N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) _6 M# z& R% @" n0 c0 L5 |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 {3 Z) z# `% k) v. Y9 Q6 z" F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' L6 E% y! M# ?( [! r7 A& q* v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' Q! D0 D" S, {% W  A. ^4 S7 d, {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  Y6 y6 n; B7 d3 a0 N: B; q( }我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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