【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 _4 t6 j# q0 n: k8 BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 h  G: H# T7 @2 l6 \+ ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. E7 C. v" I' P" ?5 ^3 vThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 i7 d( L+ {$ H( A+ o$ z) AWith the moon kissing it every night
4 w( Q  ^7 V- F  ?/ g. eSeeing the sky content with its love
+ C/ F( D9 D: S* A, {* G9 SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ F3 G1 [2 p  d) z  [# _You needn’t fear anything
# K  i2 L% Z, `6 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 E& l% e$ {$ [+ x) ]" U) }- B+ xI love you I love you with all my heart
" [) I: V( h; hNothing can compare to my love
4 ~7 w' K3 u) e) h: c/ u9 ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- _, z+ {% Y5 T8 J' f: XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 H: Q/ c" _, F& z* a3 \3 wI regret not dying
6 o% \/ ~* Q" v  \: F' vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ y, Z, `) P1 H+ U. `: ]2 V, o7 uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( E1 ?% t% v( [3 k; }% ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; o! v& f6 r4 l# ?2 [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 K% X& l" f* f1 W- S: v, q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( \' I- R0 v& t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ I3 l2 G2 n; j. Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! I4 u* C0 g) y$ q* @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% n- ~& @& j" U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; j8 `! t" t4 \# `* x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' N% X3 t' ^0 u7 z5 h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 i% P7 c* c7 K) M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ v% n! @& A0 d8 Q! b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ l; H$ @" X0 z, q& j. b( V7 \1 Q3 ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 U0 W; h; }# m/ l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 O: ?& ]  G" z* B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 ?. K  e5 v! I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 q" h& i# |  {; U# ]) P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" i, ~3 I  l3 p8 e6 E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 h% G3 w, R0 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* v( S3 K! l: f& F我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' ~' s9 r3 o& Y# @( b7 @. Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>