【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- u0 i  i& W3 h1 Z/ y9 ]/ j歌词我附在后面。
6 q* V  j6 b/ S. X0 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" R. x. e5 p. g. v3 N' GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. n; @1 A7 r; U' N: ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 |9 [2 w; z, a( K  LSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 r! `9 X3 {/ Q1 GYou needn’t fear anything
$ k" `9 [2 u' F7 v0 W, nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' b8 x0 j* G: @& ?  PEvery other word you utter is love
7 f4 {8 m6 k( P+ W) EI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) c+ K8 R- @! N  uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* ?# S* D- @& A# H" s  |) v4 W" @I want so much to see inside your heart
& N  g0 `5 v. x0 G0 R# n9 h# EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. C3 r9 F$ g; K5 A+ ?/ \% FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! l* R1 M3 r# w( ]0 eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  _* n3 h7 T! n! E$ t' ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& g( S0 _+ ^+ C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ n3 f& O3 Y6 T* X! s8 R% S- L& f, r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 g3 `; W" z! W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 Z8 |/ J5 q' P/ Z- j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 m8 n5 l! U, R- m; _5 K! e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 W# ~0 F4 l7 f% e# |" h" L  h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 a6 ~% c- w. G/ k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ x) ?, J6 R9 z; Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 G6 i7 [+ L+ V- N: h0 H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 l: k& ]" _+ C. a% K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ L' ^" K2 t& D' M! Z7 R3 F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 v9 \0 {5 I! n6 P; ^) S* I5 R% ^. y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 f/ {/ b4 q) k0 L: Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  o8 }9 q! \7 C. L- s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  _0 v+ S( O2 Q5 X  C! e( z! `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) t* M' F; S# \1 m  C8 K! O8 m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ H) Q( q+ d/ b5 e5 P1 H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 c  f9 w" y2 t; l; J: o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- g( i, X$ r0 Y/ _6 m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 X8 w# G' m4 D( ^% N- D2 F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, o8 b$ q4 T0 ?0 U1 ~3 P: {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, i( c' L* T* a1 Q+ Y9 Y2 b: S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 g$ Y$ n' y$ f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' x+ _7 V, S: F# W. U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) l$ p8 ]4 E& Z! `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>