【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' Y% r# N7 w/ K8 l0 \$ M0 x- t/ l8 M5 LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# z: m, ?' ~& V6 S# QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 M6 x  ]: J, E3 ~5 p6 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 W( }+ B$ Y) QSeeing the sky content with its love
4 j0 N% V7 Y5 N8 MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ R, `( r- d" ~: F% p( GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- h( a) S) C8 o' X1 GNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 Z$ T+ M& L2 M7 Y: {I want so much to see inside your heart
5 O' C( N' m# [; SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* K2 T) ~& l" q# pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, s% d  w$ o( x# |3 z- n$ ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! r0 j  _/ z+ R8 W$ q. s) D, mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 k5 s! Q5 Q4 O: h  Q/ v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% \' Z, R9 C; t9 p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ ?5 O3 i3 v: r3 N3 w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# i/ l9 y- z; g  S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- t8 t, O; ]0 @! |2 u- i& B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 e3 {- x4 F5 a* F6 M! @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 g. U% `9 t% c) Z5 {) Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 V, E7 |6 ^: p* }9 |3 G( _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- [* X9 `) ~; c8 [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( ^7 `) K1 H0 Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 j/ a1 z0 I; S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( ^/ Q/ Q5 M1 m4 }: \" ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) ]1 u& p6 w: k8 v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ [. P0 \7 ~5 K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& v, Q* n1 W! r7 L& M8 Z; F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ L- @- ^1 H0 u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( R; s* @* S2 e$ I/ A/ o) L- k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* k7 o9 X) y8 `3 Q7 V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) e- M2 i* q  g$ h" U# a9 q( P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& m- j6 m' ~9 B" n+ R2 `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: I0 S3 R; T0 O1 H4 A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# Z! Z" g1 w+ X; i2 S& \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' E9 ~% [) {+ l, G: t2 ?  s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! T4 z$ |  h2 }<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 A) X0 e, `* L1 r7 E8 r, ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 f* {" Z( h7 J' ~' K0 j, O0 `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 i5 D; V9 d# ]; c6 }1 s. K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 w$ Z8 ~8 l0 [1 Y3 L! D! ?8 L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- z4 {$ G/ k" U, P! W& q; V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* \8 T# m' ], b. R% f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 g& H# P* R( O' ?我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>