【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; N  ^5 Y& B2 R9 [The sky is happy down to its soul
4 F+ H( V' l. E4 I, [; b- xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& a! d9 e; C; i0 ~! I9 iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 ^0 S9 m; Q# P0 }, `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" L$ O% O+ O  E8 pEvery other word you utter is love
8 G  X/ O2 [* e( |I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& @, p3 s0 Z6 l" zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. i5 p/ d6 l/ \) q4 ^2 lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; y8 O, g) K( z- h7 \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 u, E( [5 w+ X* h( ?+ UI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 J0 @# W2 f# M& dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ K/ Y& ?% A% T7 S6 R" Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ u! K. R) z/ a8 u$ S( `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, C1 Z. S' N  m( g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ m' F; ~  P- R; M: g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 z4 t) X  q' X- v( G; m2 Q9 f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 J1 ?# s% f! {. P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ d7 I$ R  U$ m% m2 t- U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- T3 a* J( [' V0 m! b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' z1 @& o# a7 [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 @% U- x+ j2 S. {1 {0 R1 p% ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( l# N' f  }) F6 B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 B7 S6 x( z; ]2 q) t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- I3 e4 m# J+ \/ y2 a8 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ h# F1 @5 Y( Q0 a+ u3 K# d. ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  {- C8 P# `9 `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 ~; @- f& V$ w$ ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) F, F( Z! l0 @; Y6 S* _: Z: h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ O$ n2 L# [1 y7 G3 n5 l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) N' W6 z8 f' \  K' u& R" z2 V7 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# Y8 C. z/ y9 g1 Y' U9 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. `4 w, g8 b% K+ x2 Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 e8 p* i0 y( R' T( G7 S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 q( C' f1 b8 `' \0 c- R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 N7 q- G. z0 g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" b$ C+ P8 T$ z# V9 N: B; Y- d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 v3 @  h/ N+ S5 s& R<P>I regret not dying</P>
: e: u/ j6 J; t! f0 W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( a" l' S$ V  u  i3 _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* c8 i, g8 x) K8 R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 r- L; L& x5 O" e! [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ e  F+ Z  \9 N* _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* d6 u+ P7 `' K. O4 F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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5 @+ |+ W  G& I- E3 t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 X9 A! o6 ^! a' B/ h) ^- f" Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>