【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- h+ a3 m' g- E9 F5 \$ uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ ^7 Q  ^& ~- h& s( I* T1 KThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' L. `3 i+ x" h3 e# ?. QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, O: {) x  [1 I- |7 H  CYou needn’t fear anything
2 _' O( G- ~: `- b# [5 o/ z9 x2 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: `" V& p. i/ G) }6 m1 BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 _6 t# [7 b% \. \2 `I want so much to see inside your heart
) `6 S1 l5 {4 XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% ?7 X2 ]) W. h, V( P2 dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- _9 y. p$ i4 J) Y! K5 H0 K! lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 V! C2 H* }- I* e5 _/ LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( U# Q% i9 a" O4 C( a4 a$ Q  S/ |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; `( D2 b" E" r$ j3 YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' z7 L$ n) J1 x. u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 E8 I; h6 [* t  w& m# m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 }5 J# c& F$ _! a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 y  v  j3 t. h3 I9 G( n& r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( f3 C/ c/ }0 h/ U; z  w( t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ [7 F( P6 W/ M) x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! [/ a- F- _7 Y3 L9 e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( A3 _- o# A5 A% d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# _! C* O& `  s$ ^6 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 Z2 L4 z9 ?! c) c( {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. Z' g1 P$ g8 N; E# [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" g$ o( i/ z1 c# }' m, a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( l6 F/ ?0 `# Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 A7 _2 t# @. ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& U: B, L7 d, z- H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 Q# e- c* r! |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ w* A" l. Z. S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! W$ a0 C" H6 h& c$ Q2 W0 V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- E+ C9 {6 z! ^* d0 a( F1 [: D+ R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  N3 T; d. j, U; j' U4 L0 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* V  v: c3 n0 E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# u7 m& |' n9 A, H0 N" y: i! F! N. Y2 |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 t; k/ e6 c$ X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# z) |5 G$ [' d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 S2 x5 m/ X: }+ E! V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 u9 O, M0 i# ?5 a: @' ]  O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. X  a( [. {) O' Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  j/ _/ F& x$ _6 h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 U' \+ B9 v8 K' O/ A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 h& E, C: Q. ~7 v& L- B! m5 A我请你剖开它

0 N3 F2 {5 b  Y  _/ b9 J0 q6 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>