【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  D% k" [* [1 h* A9 x: x  s: O: p/ TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* J. W; S* B7 N. O; UThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 n" s9 _, h. ~0 b% _- h" Y* z4 jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ g! L( R' \$ ^: zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& a" A; X# O/ S6 X3 GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ n5 f* L6 y" F1 `/ [' D& NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" d0 N; J2 Z. H* f; c& _$ e7 K; SI want so much to see inside your heart
/ e" P) P' j% ~- H$ vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 [& B; F& @) f4 Z9 y4 HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 G, a. x; ?+ g- r7 CI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ P+ M3 w6 l7 U, F# O0 X) l! vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ W" @3 ~1 N' s  R$ r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* m; z, Q6 u$ E0 f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- m" O& V# d- t( L3 D8 a) F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' m. _1 r' `9 J% I7 e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ o* g8 ~/ L+ c  p% y! I; A4 o& G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 [  K- C, D* s+ @2 Z) g: A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 G' d" k5 y- f0 I1 I, X8 p# K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  W- X5 ?6 t4 ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- O: r4 G+ O$ u3 g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 y1 R$ K3 e0 d* D/ P0 N* k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! j: Y/ I5 k, i( b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' v; O/ m# X# r5 [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" |1 y2 Q/ D; K$ W" X) ?; e8 n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 X' s, x. O" k% s+ x. u9 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( t1 u* m& t8 ~: t3 X  N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 i' I1 L6 o% T! a9 q4 i) p  h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ ^3 I  k2 p* h; a4 m& z* o+ {# F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 d0 {5 P  r5 h$ n1 I: A& T( s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& ~& K! K6 s" Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 s  ~* Y. s: c: b5 J4 a, p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 y" b) l. N6 d0 S9 {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' P4 v3 H5 X; ~$ Q) D! g$ r! {( P4 R! M1 r/ r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 V% [/ B$ J' f4 g1 A# u9 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 U: H) x! x9 V: C* ~/ {2 q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# w9 c. N* ^& b+ S4 i/ y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 R! ?4 x! W9 l* P* b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) }1 D! k) a6 f0 @& A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  U3 g4 I* s+ {0 ?9 [7 |/ I3 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; E. s! j. O1 F7 _2 M* W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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' ?# m/ b. ]* q4 d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 s4 }( t6 `7 o! B8 n3 X5 ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>