【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# I  _, }! j- U9 c; H+ D, ?歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 B# K: b1 b. }% K1 H/ I2 aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; Q. K7 g/ P* Q# EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" Z8 ^. G& |* \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' z' t: \5 }( bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. e( R6 k9 q' `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: r  h( K# z1 a" h5 kEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. J  Q: @* t. p! m: k6 SI love you I love you with all my heart
8 K  L1 y; s! J+ {Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( i/ u) L7 V$ R$ LI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: F- w) X" N8 W1 S) @I regret not dying
0 J" G8 H- `  |( O8 [- }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 Z5 q* \$ y* Z# g( H8 JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; T9 F9 u5 c- m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 Z8 _' n, Y2 W' R9 h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  b* C" j( t. `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 l! `3 W: P% a! W/ P1 V; M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 }% O9 O% f5 f5 Y" l/ N8 i( E7 F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 V; M* n% b/ [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) o0 x! s% C0 O3 @0 Z: e# m% ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( L& c4 w0 @( B, r% ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ m3 T( E9 Y+ ]. v( W+ d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% O, k$ T2 f5 c/ W3 r$ e: p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: d; v, |$ A* ?  W9 ?( J# ?6 {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( I/ O5 S6 d' z% t0 j5 A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. h3 ?  t2 U7 i3 ?/ Z' |7 ~% {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 y4 }- I( |5 j" h- h: }0 J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ N: U: T$ d3 j# I, c8 R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 m- _- N% B  Y, \! b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% B- h( K, i* K  [& M# t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* s) o7 x/ ^2 }1 o2 s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% x7 d0 u% ~" x- ?3 G" J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 P* H' `2 W3 h+ E+ q$ Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 ^' I" E1 \% p; h* b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ |! e* `; A' o/ N0 v& i2 I2 X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% I* p0 l+ \/ c7 v* C( O4 ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: r6 j# I8 L- f  t9 W, |1 n1 A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ x. N  H+ M7 ~7 Y( n5 r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( P2 M/ l' R2 b5 w6 P$ ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 K0 [. }# D1 K) q4 i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 i+ L3 O( y7 t# a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ r2 B! M5 ^- A, }. e- V! D. q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>