【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 G# s7 G' X# V0 F( \  LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 [' P4 o  Q- rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 V# f$ h5 `1 F% @, A! ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 Q) J" x& F. c7 x1 P9 ?+ l8 w0 }' rI love you I love you with all my heart
2 q7 _3 }/ s7 m1 V( |! CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& ?& a2 s' q* nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. P& D' p7 y- Z7 ~! J8 Y; FI want so much to see inside your heart
; @, _" o, B7 ?  s- Y# U0 A3 UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. j6 S& c2 [. bI’m still filled with fear
  u! D, j6 @, a/ e* iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  `# e  H8 U  F) Q* s0 |$ PI regret not dying
3 W3 Z" @% S9 c/ c% d7 W  L- [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) I8 f6 v2 ^+ |1 y) N2 s4 M5 ^9 K$ }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: [$ F* V0 ~6 ]$ K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ E2 H5 J" [8 Q4 [( l6 t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. R, E* K2 N3 ]8 |# V+ X+ }$ I8 F2 M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. L  m. T6 y& R) s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( j/ f: a% s) I# W8 x9 ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 {: y, M$ M8 e6 d5 [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: C" C9 A3 L. j* _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ ~. U/ P) S* R: K1 ~<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! J7 ^6 Y1 K  J$ t3 n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; j2 R' x# s; Q2 z  E+ R! d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" q; ~3 I0 E# E  {* U' s2 W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, N2 H  Z( k- D" q) e# Y% V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 {& B1 Q+ N* u4 ?7 c( w% ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 n: l2 m# U" W4 O0 e" }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 L) p1 |( [9 X$ r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; G: m! j* U  b! i: F" i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( d- p# \% g2 v9 g9 m. G6 q" f1 Q6 h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 x- k2 ?: f. U; Y, A( d$ D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 K+ S4 B: C' R: w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 M6 C8 S4 G; q) n' a1 {' ~/ w% J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. ~8 t$ R* T- O# m" a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; }6 g7 Z  g" ]; M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 {( `7 y$ n5 Q3 `0 i' Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 V9 D$ q# _' P2 [. F5 u# x7 J5 C, ?5 f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 [- |" z) X% r4 c3 S5 C, Z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ D! ~6 L% J5 W. i/ Q8 Y1 h3 u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>