【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& J; @( ~4 C0 g, E% Y5 X歌词我附在后面。
- Z! C& b2 X& W0 e( E% l: w6 V$ lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% |- |! A4 d. \# ?0 n7 U: lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 D7 l! o9 S( k4 j( G$ ~% VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% V3 E( g2 P2 ]With the moon kissing it every night
" c7 l2 b* y- F9 F# ^1 ^+ o' x9 u% hSeeing the sky content with its love
- U! J( M. a! w+ R* X- d. \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 v$ h# a4 ?2 O5 V2 k( rYou needn’t fear anything
- z! d0 v5 U  ]" u- KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* s7 z  |+ X) }# C4 y7 R: bEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 g$ Z: z& B+ b, Q5 |8 @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 `; O2 k+ s: rI’m still filled with fear
- ]! y7 P/ F/ f7 c0 `3 nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 t, D0 t( q5 w3 |2 {& R0 W1 DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 x9 \1 |8 ]- E& {( dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 j* y/ h6 _& C1 P0 v" c8 D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( U7 p- Z8 S/ W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 {) f; e7 P0 D% A& I# w7 y. j: g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 z1 @! D$ R2 W* r4 q# R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 _3 Q+ [* {% C1 l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ i" C; |( t. f$ E1 u: M) o* P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& p% |/ p2 w0 W1 Z3 P: b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. E5 H! n% Q, A0 T. c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) f7 V- A* P% D' t5 j  z* b2 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" y7 w9 }" I( m0 Q0 n/ w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; t! b# C' U6 g6 r5 f- c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 @' T* e" W% t  X& o: Y  c8 [: R, Y<P>你无需担心</P>
! a* ]' h! t. M' E. T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* H; r$ \3 [, J! M1 y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- a/ `- `# l1 M' r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* `4 d* |6 s/ H! P  u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 r, m/ P8 B7 V7 @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 }2 k& `4 Z) Z2 ]! B+ I! N/ y, Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 y/ m' z0 ]0 D, s" I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* ~$ o% n9 i# R1 _8 p& H3 ^7 Y0 E8 {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ w- J6 r  ?/ r9 L8 T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* ~7 [/ y; k5 M4 B: F5 T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# D* ?# k. ]/ f9 U$ V- r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 V+ m6 D9 p% E2 T+ R9 t7 x6 Y' R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ d$ Z/ r3 b' c! V; {6 q- i0 ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 O# u/ B' p# x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 Y7 A1 _6 X% a6 f; |5 L2 ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 `! ?0 p; w0 g: d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 [' A; o" b7 }, |" |& a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; ~5 j, A, e! l+ }7 r我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>