【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 U- Z" P; t# _3 U& `* eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ @, N8 X3 R( A9 M; `; ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 A! m2 r' p, j5 V+ EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: M+ K3 w/ {4 L* M0 z7 E. H' XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 Q) k5 J; n8 Z# ~9 L& |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 L1 o- f# p/ b/ m! z- G) `( SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 {# c) D5 L6 i3 [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 @- M" X8 K) \3 M( Q4 gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ v6 ?7 S7 s  CI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 P! a( M5 C1 xI regret not dying
9 B5 d- x. M7 e; D1 a8 WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 h5 e: m- i4 x5 V' W* OWith such a tongue as yours,
$ z0 V  {6 i- _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; f; A$ A+ K. }: I4 @4 ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# i4 d& ?! i: X" q$ }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 s+ ?( K/ m0 |) x) ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 j3 U$ u3 s( z2 e' T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* N' _3 w# ~) }" j% v2 U; g( a9 f+ Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* x* z& Q5 Y, w9 [! Z7 i; m; F( r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& k; C. O# N+ T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" E5 k' [# a2 j. a3 P* p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 h9 u7 F% Q- Z: G4 x4 k, x<P>你无需担心</P>
0 O1 e1 d( t$ M1 H4 z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ f' P8 z& x. r& i' k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 [- J6 Z4 D7 I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* N! M, c) b2 u2 o& \& V3 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 H. Z2 `# C3 N  k0 ?9 H1 [+ p2 N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: s' e, f: ]3 Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- J' C2 d5 I# U/ Y7 F& A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! M0 c8 q0 e9 l- e$ L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 L) r( s, K, u, k6 ~+ H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 {# x( Y9 x2 X7 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! a: y$ F3 n$ z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( N/ b! l' P# o' |, `" d+ k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* V* G4 |# J- h& |3 \& {<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- U  ^4 G& A+ u6 W! W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ L& m* t" @* _/ H( [5 H6 L( y2 Y  G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: |# `/ X  r3 d* Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 U- C" C% q& y  |7 a* l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>