【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! G# Z; x& `9 _8 I/ }1 M; D歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- ?  }* `( Y. C& \; B% VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ _; _' E# ^1 XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: {& t- q% L) |With the moon kissing it every night
( I# ]3 V& m7 W' g+ USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 T4 n$ h2 Z5 X' ?( vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ v0 C- k6 }$ E8 M; M5 y; FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% n4 w* }6 h5 f& T$ w0 wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 U: Y' A; o& G% }I’m still filled with fear
' [! X; f5 y" R* u4 g+ {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ y! E2 b$ W& q3 fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! N; M) U, N+ E" d$ s- N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 g. y! g$ Q4 H9 T  Z( o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ e" u1 R3 l! O9 b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: w: W  t% `) \( X( U) f& I0 F$ v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 V$ s7 w3 w! z# v* I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- x1 y" E6 h9 P% y+ n0 ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; l* t. r1 j9 K5 j$ j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' O' x& s7 ]" C6 d: z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& o$ z' i. Y& H; D* l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 M1 R) Y& S! O* [7 ~/ |  c  u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- _4 s' Z& m% b3 ]% J0 I1 V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 P6 t' C" n7 l. h; d8 S1 r. a<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* t8 X' A) [& M3 ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) v7 |) p3 O9 p# u# p- V) R6 O( I0 e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ A$ |+ z' F: Z/ s7 l+ F2 n- w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ c" U; t: M5 U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 t) F! Q) p( B) N. M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ n& Y7 c& n4 y. b- `. S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; c: |# r* b# I' E1 J  V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 ~9 e6 Q5 w. W5 v, d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 @( q: R( X/ D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. b% ]. {' M) ~. R( a1 G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ g1 e% }5 S" k% V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 v/ V$ {, t- A) |' P. g* ]( ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 S! q4 J1 s" i* N/ m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& d# }+ y2 }6 o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: u; P9 r1 H/ P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. o# D, J5 \2 V! {7 y& S. O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 o: P- S. S" C( E  O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' t* T  h0 D1 ]5 n) Y我请你剖开它
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9 @$ }" F. L0 z+ Q/ A9 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>