【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' I3 X  f; K$ s1 }+ l' EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 u. w% o; U9 ?7 lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 J6 j9 D2 b1 P1 mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. x2 A8 x! [) A1 B4 A& |6 o- ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& r# R) C* ^$ j/ ?1 C3 o) VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! r; |$ @- U7 n2 L% O3 ^Every other word you utter is love
; X% r, r% x1 E+ _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( I/ K9 f- [$ h9 |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- J2 h( [2 R5 I! `" c. I& z; w9 G" K: f, {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 ~' b) R1 _/ ~5 s/ c8 EI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 ~& A9 T) Q* V! X/ Q9 g: O/ KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 m8 R/ M6 z/ t* q5 _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; d0 J7 o6 a# z: a) O3 G0 }! r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* M. J% d! D1 Q% ]. t) r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ u' n9 C0 t, b# n& T. T, W* ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, ?0 O( S# N: v+ m; F# S( j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& L+ T6 c' g# z5 y  N" G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 l  ]) u$ }/ ~7 @<P>你无需担心</P>
2 V, b; `7 G! _6 C" H9 S; [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( \, A4 x& T* [! [9 i/ Y, W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* Y  i- A0 y3 k/ I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& v* d$ _$ T% G, u6 l; o% m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) C. q2 J% L; E. ?# F& g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" b! ^! i- A" c1 u, ^! u' z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 c( `8 O5 x0 E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" c5 p8 g8 M2 v# V) d+ d* U; M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 I% z! {( Z7 G7 j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& X4 }1 J1 g6 N0 M; i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* S. u& q4 t% K: M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% W; S& u" ]  i3 ^2 ?; p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 _6 ?  G. P3 I# y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- Z9 D; X5 ?1 |- q- D' V* D' s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) {0 ]' I8 y  u/ k' ]) S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: W( r# m( K- o) d: s, c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 _0 z4 |; Y2 }  R* n- {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. a: z: A& }( X' [' ~9 k) P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  F5 A2 q( B1 T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

+ h& \4 ]  d. b0 J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& O% ?3 K+ J- Q1 ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>