【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; o' u+ j! M0 y7 p歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* M% F4 i- h- b: U" o1 q! zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! m( Z. ~( F. a3 N8 ^4 TThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* `& M% S; I* b4 U. f) O' f  MI really want to know just how much you love me
& n$ ~. D  C( }' EI love you I love you with all my heart
( e' E  D- ^+ G" F  K% LNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' |1 ?3 `* q& b% X# g9 ]( c. L- E  HI want so much to see inside your heart
# A4 o3 b; x% |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 |2 ~& E) y/ ?5 ?+ i: m, oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 z5 d  k  x2 I5 cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% a  w# X/ V7 ]# R8 xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 s$ |8 G6 [' ]  W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" d$ {, z2 h# A$ h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# ^+ P; P$ m6 g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# L5 I) j, y: [  x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ I. u. w# [1 a/ I3 u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% Z  R# s9 G. i6 h$ c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, c; E% P! B7 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ {/ I% t* `. m! U) ]7 M" ^5 F# ^" c5 \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ C! l% {$ q! y5 {) ]9 E/ F0 e% d4 B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) N" `# `& b2 @% S5 \3 j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, Z4 ?! k5 L1 e6 Q# M8 O$ j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ \9 r1 d3 \/ x9 u$ a4 x+ D# m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 `4 p+ e. s4 k4 y5 r2 y, J/ j( o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  _! n- w0 F' h1 H; q& [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( Y$ p: H3 V% ^: V2 @7 D; Q) j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, H- W' u, D2 u/ a9 S* N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 n9 x' i/ J8 G, F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ G7 f7 X6 y( U- ]4 r0 m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. c; Z* q7 Q/ x; f* n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 o5 B( P; S. `8 F& P. \, U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( x+ T3 r  x' O6 e  k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 O& a7 u% {( \, F; A3 h: ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 F* b* Y3 D0 P# u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" L" Y! L. E) L' b( q. b1 I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) C- r2 S' m3 W; ~) t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ i" R' u, a2 f( \+ o& C. M我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>