【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 d9 X7 d* [9 X5 `2 B$ OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 m% s+ E! n9 l4 }$ c+ w) I9 |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: k, W4 O7 H  o5 U2 WSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- Z1 o* q, ~3 h5 @Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) |# a; k! s$ M# C( }I love you I love you with all my heart
/ Q/ s4 T, w* n& w- q# E9 ~# xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 x8 V2 |1 w5 N5 v  F( g  `+ jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- o2 R8 P, `/ g8 b0 \$ a; bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. t. L( n# ?% CI regret not dying
2 h: S. I+ n" S) g9 dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 o9 N: A$ c7 g4 e3 WWith such a tongue as yours,
7 \) @& o2 e* G0 b( v7 Z3 Q& IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; g& }6 {- H+ `: O/ |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 V% l2 @' U) S4 V4 Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, b0 P2 @5 p; e# X' d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 c/ X: }  g& P6 i$ w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; d3 J. g  k$ |, [/ g$ }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 n; B3 |" K: p! k6 K7 a' Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# U8 k$ \4 j( A: y9 X4 |. x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 m+ r4 d4 F  f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' Z3 A7 q2 P: H) d- H# m% G+ S, |" W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# ~. M4 k! q8 h# C  D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 @1 m9 c6 u' p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 f+ @8 Q8 i" o2 S3 L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) P# H4 }+ q) a" \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- x" W/ @! Z, b' a: E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 ~4 W$ u/ L1 X9 K6 j( E9 W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 S9 v& V  w9 K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 m/ A' a1 j9 D3 i; R& m! L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 Q& l: l4 p" W; |- s  m/ o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 _% Q. i: ]" o" R$ z0 U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 M+ U; T& B7 n3 O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% R+ k' ?+ }$ \- c. A3 U) n/ Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 Z/ x$ H( A  Z2 e5 P1 Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& R, F- U: I4 e' Z- g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; E1 w1 `8 E0 f" M7 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>