【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ ?. U& i4 m) O6 y3 F$ f3 |7 _The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' I& a. I; b# [9 mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 U( ~: I$ }3 l+ HWith the moon kissing it every night
4 W5 P: @, ~6 z6 }  n: M% ]/ ?Seeing the sky content with its love
9 G' L3 ^( C0 ]2 z* x, r8 C6 }/ nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 r; t9 X# k3 K) h# _You needn’t fear anything
5 l+ l4 Z. ^; G, Z, dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 j% l4 [3 K5 ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 k3 f5 v/ t5 ~I want so much to see inside your heart
3 ?2 g  q' p* U+ JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! R5 n- p. S1 p6 k4 [5 G# L; ]& vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- J6 ^7 \1 r3 v/ x- zWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: F: ]& d1 Q5 W( CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 J  m7 z4 ?7 M. R1 _0 p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 j6 O( B1 N' w( R0 L: H, N2 I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 @' s& J1 ^1 t* q9 t' Y( x$ h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. ?, G. q7 N* {$ I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 P/ t9 t: F. s* [; }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 m" h3 y& _0 m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ ^# p) Y- p/ T; H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 g# Y& F4 b+ z6 Z" S. n- H4 M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ @) J" i" e9 @+ ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" n: Y5 g) H3 A$ d& _6 V% Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: p6 ^6 ~& N$ C- |  M4 \) X$ o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 e0 A* f1 g0 v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 K( X  u, B( I) n- S  R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 e! r$ S  E: P9 d8 g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% N0 k8 a+ N, e# Y/ R6 m" G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 E0 Z. q; @& h9 J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 q( q6 [* T! v; g# [3 s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 P" n% S! o7 p' {' C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  ~2 e! F! d( ?5 R2 u2 P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 O2 [' a2 r5 f' q6 h3 J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! W, |3 n& Q$ D. E" w4 s/ u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ [6 {2 _1 G+ X4 I0 j# B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 |5 Q& e% W  y$ ~. Z% @1 u" _; ~, u# I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# K8 K  p: i" F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% G/ l$ l% _& y/ `( m" f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 \# l# M5 ]& l3 r- G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% h( b: h3 P5 B5 H. m( x( Q' Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ ?. t. _( @( H  A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" B# @. g; ?; O- n. ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! b6 H: ~' W# T7 o6 A( z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 o8 ]4 a; p' i! E/ j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ ~: c" J: j. D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 Y* c* x6 `7 [8 g1 \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: s3 y! t/ c- `<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: |) A" ~0 G2 Y# q我请你剖开它

5 }" g5 h, A. W' d) p' {( Z+ `0 x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>