【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 m! h' `( N9 ~8 T% k歌词我附在后面。
& C( O; {; W, R  fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 |! }/ d3 Q) c" S8 W' _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 W& N( Z2 W4 S& ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 J9 k) ^* q2 }% i" p3 d4 W; g2 R. wEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. F# W! v5 w. |I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 i$ N! V) m% t4 ~" F0 }! [+ }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* B$ n. {+ P' F% RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* ~3 i' C5 R6 X! |- \# F- T6 i' {I’m still filled with fear
; x* t/ {1 q, _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" Z8 x) X( B; KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- y0 R1 g' a# t6 t, WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  G  ~; b, J! D5 X3 dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ N' |4 Y9 Q3 y3 R) M* L) m# H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) [* P$ Q, Y3 \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ b3 @1 K& d' I8 D" e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 V6 w; X7 ], Q/ w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! v! P) H( }& o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 o6 d; M: z, k5 C" O8 S3 F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# t  G9 @  @. i# T' T9 f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. ^% _% b! c: S% M* C<P>你无需担心</P>
9 \+ g/ C$ T9 G0 e: ~0 f1 n4 v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- l( U% ^, }* w& q" j) q6 r; j' W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" Z; ^9 J* h* n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; A/ p9 S& d, J% @$ W7 k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 P. \4 R9 y1 Z  ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 f: C4 }: j+ @0 t+ Q- N( I* @0 v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: q) P& P" A5 m* [. H+ p  f2 A6 E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 m6 D, s6 M( H5 g" h4 W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ P- q4 j( t& `, M$ k, Z# K( P& s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 A8 b- E+ V! A; a% Q) x( n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 z3 _. i) `6 ^, r8 ~& q4 p4 D  Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ u; Q2 Y. n( i3 s9 `% w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 B, u0 p" w! ^6 Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- F/ R# k9 Y. t. y9 x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- s; \0 i! P2 L/ Q9 f! z2 c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" M' n4 g; p/ d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- ?1 m9 T8 c6 `9 `6 U9 A6 f' Q3 w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) H7 a2 `; P, s+ x% F. Y$ i我请你剖开它
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8 Z7 }% B) Q0 F5 o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>