【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' f4 v2 ?: H! [  s* V; u3 @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 V( M$ X$ D: rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 C4 A; t& o: fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& F9 g0 w1 f# d# GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! @/ I3 n1 s' WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 T  b! ^, D  y: j  o) y' f" KEvery other word you utter is love
; v) Y1 S- l6 M+ S6 D/ oI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( |* @" C# M- GNothing can compare to my love
5 a. S7 e6 B/ U8 MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* x* ~' u5 [& N; b$ C# M/ MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- C+ e1 Q+ V+ H/ }4 r6 p- M) nI want so much to see inside your heart
: o, b8 t2 ?; c/ Y2 _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& V2 `' O8 Q0 A( P4 @1 ?3 fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 s2 I7 r; }" @$ m; a# ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! v5 C) ], c* g# u( Y) Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# D) U1 v7 q  r5 ]$ Y5 f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 {% _- h" K" i7 ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' e2 P1 a6 h# d2 Y" e5 s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 V, V/ w# W* {: R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, i# ~  b* u- K" f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! T& |" i9 C0 d& u% L  G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 t4 F; ]7 x6 I1 y1 v; r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 F8 o- H3 E6 H5 X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' k+ p$ l0 Q& [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" l/ z! d, @6 K9 V( ^6 L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 p) o6 h5 G$ W5 x0 y5 v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. P9 k- j6 ]- A9 d+ K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 |; e) Q$ J& S- I8 P2 l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 Z3 A* `; R* p. h% b6 d' Q  k# Z9 I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 [5 Q4 _$ B/ G; y. @1 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 M! e. \# s1 ^0 e3 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 g2 l# u$ ]/ t# D8 a6 U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' o5 `9 S# m8 [: p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 q/ O& q( J6 q2 X( U. }/ I/ `  @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 b) g5 X. h1 B5 i9 K3 G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 |, }& |5 D! i% L' p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  A/ e/ z6 L8 ?3 i7 X+ N+ `! R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' r5 ^: l( Y# v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( T- d& o  g) P7 f" P2 t$ \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  a! X9 {8 p; }& x+ ~- j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( \( `: f6 V$ ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 P. p0 j4 J- \$ h) x3 Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>