【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  A$ V/ A9 o) P; O. s2 W7 a% UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. \( W& q) P7 JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. f( ~7 l- D4 h3 L9 O0 u$ _With the moon kissing it every night
( \1 U5 k# M% bSeeing the sky content with its love
6 ?6 W: W; ?6 mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; [' V0 ^* V# i4 }8 ?I really want to know just how much you love me
2 D/ H2 I' ?7 g# m3 rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 J2 R4 ^/ O3 F7 ~) fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: s- K2 O/ A# [$ j: t' z, i8 ~I’m still filled with fear
' X0 d/ q- E+ ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* [$ o) @8 [) u3 g7 K; PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  j2 k* F( l7 }0 v. E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% [) |2 ]/ y" g. `) T. w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# }2 l; Y( {$ Q7 L7 h3 X9 p- g- D) ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 ^! B6 _& C$ n' r: M' d; ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 Q. }: V/ D- }6 a! Q# c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, g2 Z/ R5 ]* ?. c2 }2 t3 ~) s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! f  L5 U& Y. `9 Z1 ]; m/ X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 e, T( t- v, B( E- i) I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  G; G2 j6 _9 F( Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ b6 Y0 b: i; B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ ?4 ~# S/ d( T2 R7 S: a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 _7 n3 j" [3 m1 L9 w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 Z) D2 U2 k2 p: d- h3 |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 D6 y9 W5 G. T) m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# \) D% d6 i- p( i4 x& V8 r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 F% Z) Y8 k( r" M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  `! _0 p0 [% V& V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% \. h- Q# `3 w: }3 T. |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. u( P( n; Z) E1 X9 @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 c6 o6 J5 B* o6 ~8 T' L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: G. J- x0 t1 _+ O7 F0 y: s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 S6 q3 g9 o4 S: Z- a* }$ v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 D7 _# S  C0 {' `; A- V& D3 D8 X& J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" N0 i9 H3 ^4 s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. j. W) Y8 V: I- v" @5 ~( N7 F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' c$ J) U5 S$ k! f' n: W1 N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! W0 N. J7 U( B& b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 n$ K; ?0 [4 L8 b. V; t2 L) N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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' j9 B: a, l4 L& `  Z9 T" V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>