【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 J. |- [3 t/ p7 V' {2 sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; A1 l8 j! ?; a  U% @) H4 T; b/ L; w9 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 V" I* }# d" }  ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ q' W: ~2 b% lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; Z1 a. m, R& f$ n+ XEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ L  T/ a1 D  P  E. yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( V7 i5 ^/ r4 I: m8 U' _3 \, eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; m' a1 j& W8 ]/ w; t5 l4 N3 zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. I/ |* n; T. ?. _- ~# ~* l0 B1 jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" d. l. K1 x3 C- ?I regret not dying
& t, E. v. o, s7 F: MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ X  O# G2 W  z* v( C5 V# `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ U; b! z  S4 h6 ?& ^- }' H3 PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 @  |! A+ }( n) Q0 m% vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 @0 P' Q, H; f2 L* C7 O, t/ D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 I; _! f; c; ]/ n) Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, \6 Q  A! p1 y- |( e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 Z  i2 Z5 T9 n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: g' Z4 X) \- K( j) N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. q! X; a# ~. F1 n0 y) L& V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. z3 F. r$ M: m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 C% |, p1 k, L- ~: a5 P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 [- O) b, v7 j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- i# o( v5 W$ t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, b! f% C: L+ _! f! l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 U( e5 y0 E9 r' i9 D& _8 h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 z) V  M$ H- H( e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 D# |  U  w  u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' H- G! \: F4 E' d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% u; F8 F' r6 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# H; i  }' N, x# Z6 l. ]0 b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( ?' X7 e  H) m. d0 P: ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: l' v; k8 }0 `! v7 a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; U! X& q- J! c: @9 O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) c: V  B$ A9 v; M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 m3 s1 Y5 r& @/ p& ~7 E& ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 K) v( g, F+ e: [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ S" P+ N. v( y- i) P+ u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! _6 n; b7 m1 M) C' W/ g" A" y2 }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 g( ^4 T; R+ P0 M% r- B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 e) z, q$ P! }- @  c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 k5 k/ g* x+ \+ i, @5 _: I! y' T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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8 |0 ]2 x% p( x! [" E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, N+ A7 h8 y; Q0 z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>