【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

! m; q  G. \) R9 [) iThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 Z7 [( Z5 D+ \7 Q: q/ |2 B. YThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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我想我從未表露出
# X9 H% U; w  t% J4 v深藏在我心底的那句
) W7 i! ?" c% P+ ~, m我愛你  

! J  W1 j/ P/ s2 @% B. tFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
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在遇見你的第一刻
. t( f. C/ g% y你已經深深的佔領了
我的心
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We meet and talk everyday,
, @0 f) V8 {$ n: G0 eBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

1 a7 H4 ~% A6 R/ E5 i; C5 K+ h- C縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意
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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 h" L) M" i$ ?/ k8 e8 @I would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
) [( M/ K5 H- P! H" {) w* F你的心情

3 C) f; t' c5 `( E7 n' @Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

1 ?* k8 ]$ P$ r6 ~愛你 想要告訴你
6 Z6 P# U7 i7 z$ T卻總是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& r" z, e! \& o也許有一天
6 I* d. P  t$ S; l( _你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
8 S2 m: T8 w$ g6 w6 OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
+ m4 ?2 z4 e0 S+ T, b% X1 V讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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7 w* H; E- m9 J( v' X% j. qLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單一句愛
$ [; e: C" K' R' q4 M為什麼如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
) D' T/ z$ ~& gBut I never did
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; [- C- x. @5 V& ^9 s愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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) ?$ f  c. \1 h' L5 z也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

  U9 t) W- E6 c; \* E希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
7 _; O5 d) g, W7 d我心底的秘密
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, ]9 m9 @% K$ Q3 R6 H3 \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
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Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
5 C! U* G9 B8 l0 C: j: _. V托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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对唱曲参赛译稿

The moonlight is shining brightly,
& q) }/ ~5 f. h! j2 ?- |Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

" i1 i0 |6 @- V" \! l9 k( `皎潔月光下
" \7 f, J2 _3 K7 r3 K# P天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂

The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" e; q7 K# w/ F& S1 B) w5 ^The sky is happy down to its soul
1 e: F& }& u- w& vWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love

月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
- o" R' h1 `7 Y" B月光輕吻著夜幕
8 s- ?2 K* G% }+ m7 n, T5 k星空充滿著歡樂
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1 ]& q5 B1 N, ZIt fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
3 F3 J) b5 J: |- X0 v+ d1 o- ]終將逝去
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You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

你勿須擔心憂鬱
- }1 D0 h' H: C, N7 s我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
堅定不渝

Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me

你的一言一語都是愛
9 p. b. H1 c7 U9 i, K2 U& ~我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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3 h) v' v6 [4 n8 ^4 S3 qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
- q2 d, q# x: O' }3 |你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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I want so much to see inside your heart
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我想看透你的心

- J( x* L/ k& x: V) I/ a. W9 OI invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
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  N, Y4 ]3 b4 _  e6 Q我歡迎你將它打開
1 m" }/ Z% S1 L- ?, {! _* U! j. e2 T我願意用生命
來證明我的愛

I’m still filled with fear
5 d, H  g$ M! v8 ]! ~6 h- `, ^9 iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000

可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
: W# o4 G  \' L% v/ Y1 g4 y遠遠不及千萬

. Q4 r+ j) E- q0 O6 X: yWith such a tongue as yours,
( \3 r, t5 T' yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
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這樣一張巧舌
+ @# {; S& G$ Z% A8 E5 G你的言語都跟不上
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# l" g$ T5 h: R( v$ C& |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' H7 v! T$ r8 P# z; J) t如果我真有千百張口
' ^" q5 p5 r8 D* Z  t我將對你訴說
; z" l; ~) C7 k7 y2 i4 m千萬個心思
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Rambling on about a thousand words of love

訴說千萬個
+ I: `. S8 ^% q0 _7 W愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

& c0 x  w9 t+ j" m  t. |是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒