【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
- H/ i- g1 s1 g; J4 T* vxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
8 `) A" `/ j2 C( tvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

1 {% K8 W0 t8 m. T0 {The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
, P/ x8 Z% s. ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
& A5 g8 O4 ?; z/ z6 ^0 ^" ?* eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
) l; j0 M$ F4 {4 a7 H. sThe sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空
4 m6 H; e5 ]9 d
With the moon kissing it every night
. T; b, m1 ]2 T) f3 c# D# i: K" _看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
# Z! s  X$ y" s! e7 @You needn’t fear anything
; K* U% Y8 l, i: Y怕这怕那 又是何苦
( w7 w8 ]: a5 I4 m7 ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
( L& T1 y$ w! b2 t口口声声 说你爱我
0 [' [* S) c. aI really want to know just how much you love me
6 ^" F' H$ W; d6 `7 `真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 R, O# X9 J8 x. i' E爱你爱你 全心全意
+ Q" P9 k( K9 K% L3 GNothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比

: ~$ c- b' Z/ ~1 YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 r  z& G9 j; Q. W( d  {能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
8 r$ |0 h0 A! {% F' B0 LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- C/ g- q0 W1 w9 o& ~整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
/ i0 u. G. K' n% DI want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
) k' A  l( K4 Z" w- L  STo prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 b3 O( k: A* e7 t, \若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
5 x6 W; p; A1 n) c% z8 o可我依然满心忧虑
" H' P% x+ g( p! x( }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
* z1 [( `8 R1 S* T, x- u2 q+ m5 }I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
" a/ e( r' Z1 K' p* L9 K: YI only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
, d5 c2 a7 ?- i' @7 oIt’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
2 x* @9 b, H0 w* i* IWith such a tongue as yours,
/ Q- X3 d% v) M+ N2 d, s9 d你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 o' d: U6 _" O1 O' c+ o能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
3 K6 E& p3 I5 fRambling on about a thousand words of love
8 u: z+ f/ t2 J; F! h, F: h& L向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

2 J9 v; }5 N9 t7 M! o$ |- Z; pThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
" |; D5 R: ]$ l6 T+ VThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
9 |; y# v1 e) S0 e, Q; {3 z9 I5 Q对你一见倾心
8 x3 K+ Y! h# h; F% SI already loved you with all my heart
4 m. z2 _" y" J) \8 T从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
9 Y8 D' h" J. Q6 S1 N' IBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' Q! C9 M7 V: [2 B4 V& ?奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 b$ o; x$ d# o, K0 T  x+ @5 U若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
& T: a0 k( i& A2 W6 M7 uI would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
$ B/ N1 m9 B: R1 dLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
( V  O% s# X/ R* j+ }+ Z( v- ^. gWhy is it so difficult to express?
. f/ p6 ~! S/ }  [. ^为何如此难言？
8 ~3 K. n* Q5 M9 Z, |5 ?+ D# sI want to confess that I love you,
7 J7 o- g5 _" p我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
" m- }, Z  u8 |7 NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
9 n- V6 t1 M* P- X2 J+ F7 W- t假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' F2 z/ o& ~# O+ I$ \8 E/ h今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
# j; q5 @- B7 HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
5 b! ^7 Y' P8 D% s! S5 G) A, NCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

* z! r  v# V9 m+ \Love… just the word love
8 H) z5 r% W8 K+ {7 E! w爱呀，爱就一个字
3 N" [  |5 D7 o8 [1 P7 W; p& kWhy is it so difficult to express?
# k1 [7 Y0 q' U' c# n3 H9 ^为何如何难言？
: H7 N; W* Q7 bI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
7 h* C, P, G. K+ J0 Z% c  t却始终未曾出口
5 w! i, K' {5 f8 C4 |) h0 H  |* YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
+ j" u2 f# z7 ?If today isn’t too late,
- J; o9 v5 i0 d  h9 _假如还不太迟
6 p: p0 n. s6 }8 h" Q+ J" wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& Z$ q# k. X, l+ Q" o今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  Z6 w' J  |- |: l/ Z) {; B不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
, N7 L+ o3 t: ~& e从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

! B& S% [0 x. YCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
% m* j' i3 P7 l( N, R" c从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
( S- S# y  @# x+ \老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
. g% d  h" m& U7 m# qvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。